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8/24/20, 11:33 PM
This whole series was amazing! I know you said you used the help of an AI story generator, but this blew my expectations out the window. It was a rollercoaster from start to finish. The main thing I loved about this whole series was that it wasn't just mindless sex like the majority of the stories on here. It had a steady plot and you kept building with every chapter. I hope to see you bring back Joey in the future, if possible. Honestly, I cannot wait for your next piece, just be sure to take a break cause i'm sure it wasn't easy coming up with all of this.
Anonymous
8/24/20, 11:28 PM
This story was the best seven hours of my life. It was the only seven hours of my life! Maximum Derek!!
8/24/20, 11:25 PM
I love how you concluded the story with more vignettes. The ending sets up the premise for another series that I hope you write sometime if you are so inspired. Incredible work!
8/24/20, 11:10 PM
Oh a cop scenario is definitely on my mind, I just haven't gotten around to write it yet! Remember Uncle Ray and his son Mike from the Superbowl chapters....? ;) Stay tuned!
Anonymous
8/24/20, 11:08 PM
wonderful
8/24/20, 9:39 PM
Love. This. Story. Please write more!
8/24/20, 9:07 PM
@MalSkin - Thanks man! I love it when I find out people are reading every day. Makes me feel like I've done my job right. There's one more chapter awaiting approval, just a little epilogue to put a bow on things and make a few of you scream at me. I wanted to portray the stranger as fundamentally a likable and good person. I think there's a lot more complexity than just 'good' and 'evil', no matter how we approach it. I strongly believe that everyone is the hero in their own story, and so from his perspective, this is a good story about making people happy and returning home. From another perspective, this would be a horror story, akin to invasion of the body snatchers.
8/24/20, 8:46 PM
Yeah I agree, the Benji cake is baked. But the frosting for me would just be to see his Daddy pick him up. Seeing his eyes light up finally meeting his daddy and to see what kinda dom Daddy is in person if hes gonna be sweet or strict. Could just be done from a different pov supervising adoption day. The way you write conditioning really hits the spot!
8/24/20, 8:23 PM
loved this series and i looked every day to see if a new chapter had been posted. Yes it was about sex and lust, but it was also i think about Good and Evil (the last chapter said that) desending into hell. Just my thought maybe the stranger could have been Good person taken over by his inner lust
8/24/20, 8:12 PM
@little tiny tim - Yup, what @Hypnothrill said. You want stories written by someone who's actually turned on by those things. Vanilla is, even at it's kinkiest, a little on the vanilla side. @Hypnothrill - Thanks man! I tried to address this with a throwaway line in the last chapter that I've just posted. The long and the short of it is that the Stranger is in desperate circumstances on earth, and he's using the tool he has at his disposal. Glad to hear it improved, I agree, those first couple chapters were rough. If I decided to bundle this up as a book, they'd need a rewrite. @Edlam - Thanks bro! We love you!