Recent Comments

8/23/20, 9:02 PM
this whole series is a terrific piece. great idea i love all of derek williams's writing, but this is stunning
8/23/20, 8:50 PM
Well written, A great start to what I hope will be a very long sequel...Hope it's a little kinkier than the original however....I don't know what the author is into, but some hot fetish's would be nice...[Boots, Cigars, Piss, even a little 'sissy' stuff ???,] who knows what perversion's & corruptions would make Dicksville an even more exciting town !
8/23/20, 8:45 PM
It is great to see this series carry on - thanks
8/23/20, 8:38 PM
What a nice surprise (and posted on my birthday, no less)! I hope you continue this. For one thing, I'd like to know what's up with the flashing sunglasses (and why they could still see the motel clerk winking while he was wearing sunglasses).
Zac
8/23/20, 8:20 PM
Great sequel! Looking forward to more (I hope).
Anonymous
8/23/20, 8:00 PM
the tags are inaccurate and it didn't have a satisfying build up or end. also seemed kind of dumb.
8/23/20, 7:52 PM
Really loving this series. Can't wait to see what's going to happen next.
Jun 7, 2020
Drake Nightstrom
8/23/20, 7:22 PM
I love the dynamic of this story, and the mechanic of the flash. Gives it a sort of hypnoitc vibe but nothing specifically stated as such. I hope you write another like this.
8/23/20, 6:49 PM
I. Love. This. Story. SOOOO much.
Joejvegas
8/23/20, 6:27 PM
Loved the blog style and slow transformation. i have been slowly transformed these past 6 years into an obedient hypnoslave for Master. i appreciate stories from/about others whose lives have improved through hypnosis and a loving Master.