Recent Comments

Aug 22, 2020
pmk
8/23/20, 2:27 PM
This was great! Very well written and imaginative. I would love to see more.
8/23/20, 1:33 PM
Wow at first I was a little hard pressed to find enough time to dive into reading this story but you really didn't waste a word. Good world building, nice descriptions, good pacing ^.^ glad I found time finally Haha
Anonymous
8/23/20, 12:48 PM
In essence the evil corporation behaved like one would in the real world. Even so, this ruins the story because it doesnt make you want to deal with a bad end again and thus any of your other writings. it has no hook.
8/23/20, 11:08 AM
justs want to say I'm really enjoying this series. I look forward each day for the next episode.
Aug 23, 2020
Oddballs
8/23/20, 9:54 AM
Very interesting and intriguing concept. All I would say though is that the writing style and structure can use some improvement. Personally I felt that attention to detail needed more articulation and wording; the on-going procession was a bit too basic for what I usually go for. But overall, this was an inspired piece that sparked a few hot chords with me - had me wanting to see the other modes are like, I was really fond of the gay horny fratboy style he took on.
8/23/20, 9:18 AM
we are almost there, good luck, keep going
Anonymous
8/23/20, 9:16 AM
excellent
Nov 26, 2007
8/23/20, 8:51 AM
Found this story a second time around and can now appreciate the nice, tight writing.
8/23/20, 8:49 AM
A wonderful ride, I loved it.
Aug 23, 2020
8/23/20, 7:29 AM
Wow I really like this! Love sexy dudes being turned into robots!