Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/23/20, 12:48 PM
In essence the evil corporation behaved like one would in the real world. Even so, this ruins the story because it doesnt make you want to deal with a bad end again and thus any of your other writings. it has no hook.
8/23/20, 11:08 AM
justs want to say I'm really enjoying this series. I look forward each day for the next episode.
Aug 23, 2020
Oddballs
8/23/20, 9:54 AM
Very interesting and intriguing concept. All I would say though is that the writing style and structure can use some improvement. Personally I felt that attention to detail needed more articulation and wording; the on-going procession was a bit too basic for what I usually go for. But overall, this was an inspired piece that sparked a few hot chords with me - had me wanting to see the other modes are like, I was really fond of the gay horny fratboy style he took on.
8/23/20, 9:18 AM
we are almost there, good luck, keep going
Anonymous
8/23/20, 9:16 AM
excellent
Nov 26, 2007
8/23/20, 8:51 AM
Found this story a second time around and can now appreciate the nice, tight writing.
8/23/20, 8:49 AM
A wonderful ride, I loved it.
Aug 23, 2020
8/23/20, 7:29 AM
Wow I really like this! Love sexy dudes being turned into robots!
8/23/20, 7:24 AM
id like to request, please have more time for Bob's slavery again! would love to see an older man enslaved!
8/23/20, 7:17 AM
It's a quick and hot story, and the premise is very interesting! As Hypnothrill, there's a lot of back stories that seem to be still in the dark and worth exploring. Hope you intend on pursuing more into this plot...I feel it could become something much more exciting than just this one-off story!