Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/23/20, 6:25 AM
this is a really hot story! brody needs to be made to go naked... and shaved... in front of his father. His father needs to shave him and keep him shaved.
8/23/20, 5:00 AM
@Benv: It was assumed that happened some time before this chapter. I decided to not go into it because I couldn't think of anything too interesting for that team, and didn't want to storyline to become too similar and repetitive of the other takeover plots.
8/23/20, 4:41 AM
Glad you enjoyed it, PupScout, and thanks for your suggestions for how I could have expanded this fictional universe. Sometimes you get locked into a certain mode of narration, and that makes it difficult to provide much more backstory. Here, the story was being told through Leo's addled brain, with short flashbacks only when he rubbed his chest stubble (the symbol of his free will growing back a tiny bit). I wanted to give readers a short taste of what had been going on, but still represent Leo's confusion and scattered memories. I felt like I was pushing the bounds of plausibility just to have Leo remember so much--if I tried to expand the story by adding another 2000 words of backstory, then the poor guy would have to be standing in the shower for a whole hour just to remember it all!
8/23/20, 1:59 AM
I'm surprised by how much I like this story.
Aug 22, 2020
8/23/20, 12:46 AM
Love this.
8/22/20, 11:57 PM
OMG, THIS IS THE BEST DAY EVER! Oh how I missed this series. Big males under younger one, feet, jocks, what else can I ask? <3
Aug 22, 2020
8/22/20, 11:56 PM
Nice to have you back, dear friend! Slave Academy was a very great series and Todd's mindscape scenes were really hot and erotic, so I understand the inspiration to write one and I think you did a spectacular job! Loved the whole take down through the video game and I enjoyed how mindless David, Mark and Reggie became at the end. You should definitely do a part 2! Maybe we can see how Mark and Reggie were taken down. I also don't mind seeing how Yuri plans to celebrate with his jock slaves, that would be fantastic too.
8/22/20, 11:41 PM
so happy there was another chapter added. when did rob baseball team become enslaved?
8/22/20, 11:14 PM
This is hot, poor George but he deserves it not because he bullied Lenny, rather because he is bigger and more muscled than Lenny. Wish Collin had humiliated the coach more. Looking forward for the next chapter.
pedanticSatyr
8/22/20, 10:56 PM
You don't heat up helium to make hot air balloons rise.