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Aug 23, 2020
8/23/20, 7:29 AM
Wow I really like this! Love sexy dudes being turned into robots!
8/23/20, 7:24 AM
id like to request, please have more time for Bob's slavery again! would love to see an older man enslaved!
8/23/20, 7:17 AM
It's a quick and hot story, and the premise is very interesting! As Hypnothrill, there's a lot of back stories that seem to be still in the dark and worth exploring. Hope you intend on pursuing more into this plot...I feel it could become something much more exciting than just this one-off story!
8/23/20, 6:55 AM
I feel humbled and honoured to be mentioned by another fellow author, thanks for the shout out Behaven! ;) This series has been fantastic so far and you've got stuff that checks off a lot of boxes for me, so I've enjoyed it a lot! :) Keep it up and looking forward to read more of this story or other new work from you!
8/23/20, 6:28 AM
@Lusty Stallion - Yup, it's over 55,000 words so far, in just a couple weeks. I'm proud of how well it's coming together. Today's story has been submitted and should be coming out soon. I really should have posted it before I sat down with a few drinks and some old friends.
Anonymous
8/23/20, 6:25 AM
this is a really hot story! brody needs to be made to go naked... and shaved... in front of his father. His father needs to shave him and keep him shaved.
8/23/20, 5:00 AM
@Benv: It was assumed that happened some time before this chapter. I decided to not go into it because I couldn't think of anything too interesting for that team, and didn't want to storyline to become too similar and repetitive of the other takeover plots.
8/23/20, 4:41 AM
Glad you enjoyed it, PupScout, and thanks for your suggestions for how I could have expanded this fictional universe. Sometimes you get locked into a certain mode of narration, and that makes it difficult to provide much more backstory. Here, the story was being told through Leo's addled brain, with short flashbacks only when he rubbed his chest stubble (the symbol of his free will growing back a tiny bit). I wanted to give readers a short taste of what had been going on, but still represent Leo's confusion and scattered memories. I felt like I was pushing the bounds of plausibility just to have Leo remember so much--if I tried to expand the story by adding another 2000 words of backstory, then the poor guy would have to be standing in the shower for a whole hour just to remember it all!
8/23/20, 1:59 AM
I'm surprised by how much I like this story.
Aug 22, 2020
8/23/20, 12:46 AM
Love this.