Recent Comments

Slave Abdamelek
8/22/20, 8:16 PM
Thank you for your continuing support. As you see, it is very difficult to decide which side to root for, since they are both very powerful and seem to be deserving of ruling over men. But of course, I am on my Pharaoh's side and will never again be tempted to leave it.
Drake Nightstrom
8/22/20, 7:48 PM
@Philo well if you want a story to go the way you want you have three options. 1. write your own story 2. Find stories written like you want or 3. commision one to be written the way you want. I do take commissions.
8/22/20, 7:17 PM
This is such a hot concept! I love that Jimmy flips the tables in the middle! Always have to be careful with what you wish for!
8/22/20, 6:07 PM
Go Owen! (I'm not just here for the perversion.)
8/22/20, 5:57 PM
Appreciate the feedback as always, exposition has always been something I hated. Back stories, explanations, and that's typically why my stories do without, but, after having had a few drinks (hence the typos) I had this idea that's far more ambitious than I usually try, and couldn't get it out of my head. So I wrote it, and in my poorer judgement, I think, posted it without significant review. But, sink or swim, I want to see comes out of this as a challenge, let's see if I stick the landing.
Anonymous
8/22/20, 3:49 PM
Did I miss something? Owen went in the pool, but he didn't change, or did he? Grant changed for sure. I'm confused. I liked it and hope more is on the way . . . but I'm still confused.
Anonymous
8/22/20, 3:47 PM
This story is my current favorite on the site!
8/22/20, 3:22 PM
Awesome story! I'd love to see it continue.
8/22/20, 3:21 PM
I check back so often, I'm always so eager to see what will happen next. Your pieces excite me like few authors on this website do, the pacing and material and.... Latent eroticism in your writing is so captivating. I hope you never stop. Poor Darius, being tricked into forgetting... I would help him remember. I am so conflicted.... I would be so willing to help the pharaoh, but if I were to see the scene play out, to see Darius be made blank, I wouldn't be able to stop myself from falling under Mered Nahab's away. His power is so.... Influential.
8/22/20, 3:09 PM
this story is hot, really I love your storys, if one day you want please contact me.