Recent Comments

8/22/20, 3:21 PM
I check back so often, I'm always so eager to see what will happen next. Your pieces excite me like few authors on this website do, the pacing and material and.... Latent eroticism in your writing is so captivating. I hope you never stop. Poor Darius, being tricked into forgetting... I would help him remember. I am so conflicted.... I would be so willing to help the pharaoh, but if I were to see the scene play out, to see Darius be made blank, I wouldn't be able to stop myself from falling under Mered Nahab's away. His power is so.... Influential.
8/22/20, 3:09 PM
this story is hot, really I love your storys, if one day you want please contact me.
8/22/20, 2:19 PM
it was hot until you made him the submissive one
8/22/20, 2:05 PM
I thought this was a hot story, but one that doesn't quite measure up to your best work. You're so great at writing stories where fathers and sons are stricken by uncontrollable, unexplainable lust for one another, lust that basically transforms them into rutting animals. But here there's a really complicated backstory for why Sandeep is having sex with the older men in his neighborhood, and it frankly makes no sense to me. Why is Sandeep's father doing this? Why did he wait until they'd already been in the neighborhood a few months to start doing this? You don't have to have tons of exposition, but for me, this story is stuck in an uncanny valley where there's simultaneously too much explanation for what's happening and not enough explanation.
8/22/20, 1:47 PM
Where can I get hypnotized like that? That story was so hot it had me hard & leaking the whole time. Very creative writing. I felt like I was on stage with the guys. Maybe some day I can get hypnotized..any suggestions?
8/22/20, 1:45 PM
Very hot! There are a few typos, but I hope you continue!
8/22/20, 12:57 PM
will you do more of this one?
8/22/20, 12:43 PM
u might want to check for typos...
Jun 2, 2020
8/22/20, 12:28 PM
Hot as fuck!
Aug 21, 2020
8/22/20, 12:19 PM
Great job with this story. Probably not to everyone's taste but the concept was interesting and I liked that you paced the story out well to allow the plot to develop. The mind control and personality change elements were particularly hot!