Recent Comments

7/5/25, 11:50 PM
I have to admit, I got a laugh out of Hayden demonstrating enough independence of thought only to want a White Claw lol. Very hot as usual, Bovine, I can't wait for the next chapter!

7/6/25, 12:18 AM
@[Mindwinder](/user/show/296830) Hayden is a really fun main character because he can’t break out Daddy Musk Hypnosis to save himself from a life of enslavement, BUT he can break out of it to purchase one of the most douchebag-coded drinks known to man. (Jk I actually like Whiteclaw. Maybe I can ge them to do a brand partnership with this series)
Zander
7/5/25, 11:50 PM
Great continuation, a lot of things are becoming clear little by little. I liked how you reveal the characters and their past as well as the present. I look forward to the continuation of the story from Lucen, Elias and Theo. Will they fully unravel the secret of Veil and learn his plans and scale in order to stop him?
Noris
7/5/25, 11:19 PM
Hi, when will there be a continuation of this wonderful story)?
7/5/25, 8:18 AM
the writing is pretty charming! id love to read more reality altering stuff by you

7/5/25, 9:06 PM
@[panpan](/user/show/501137) Charming is the perfect adjective for who I *think* this author is 👀
7/5/25, 8:49 PM
Great story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Anonymous
7/5/25, 8:00 PM
Need more!! Make some big sub small dom action please!! Maybe a lil beefy bulky bodybuilders that love getting topped by super smart twinks!!
7/5/25, 1:43 PM
I cannot wait to read what happens next at the gym!

Nico's Beef Co
7/5/25, 6:41 PM
@[monarch_mvl118](/user/show/28683) Ty for the comment. We gonna take a little detour to what Nico was doing during this chapter.

7/5/25, 6:58 PM
@Nico's Beef Co I'm looking forward to that!
7/5/25, 5:14 PM
hahahaha i prob know who the author is, because you’re one of my favorites. missed u so much dude and cant wait to read the rest of the story
Anonymous
7/5/25, 5:03 PM
AI junk but hot
MASTER PASCUAL
7/5/25, 4:55 PM
VERY NICE SHIT I WOULD LOVE TO MAKE A MANS DREAM COME TRUE. I NEED MY SCALLY COCK CLEAN. I WANT TO SEE THE FAG LICKING MY NIKES