Recent Comments

8/22/20, 1:45 PM
Very hot! There are a few typos, but I hope you continue!
8/22/20, 12:57 PM
will you do more of this one?
8/22/20, 12:43 PM
u might want to check for typos...
Jun 2, 2020
8/22/20, 12:28 PM
Hot as fuck!
Aug 21, 2020
8/22/20, 12:19 PM
Great job with this story. Probably not to everyone's taste but the concept was interesting and I liked that you paced the story out well to allow the plot to develop. The mind control and personality change elements were particularly hot!
8/22/20, 10:25 AM
I really enjoyed the first half with the guy on the phone. i wouldve loved to follow him as he got processed. not as into all the drag stuff though.
8/22/20, 8:31 AM
thanks appreciate that.
8/22/20, 6:01 AM
Hi Kyle, I can't promise a set time. But like I said, it was meant to be one single chapter, and I decided to split it because it was already getting really lengthy. So for the second half of this chapter, I'd say that I have maybe over half of it written down already. The rest of the plot is already planned out, but I just need to focus on writing it out. So I sure hope it won't have to be long, but I don't want to commit to you guys and then not be able to deliver. Thanks for your patience and stay tuned! :)
8/22/20, 5:59 AM
oh my gaaaaad we have an update!!!
boi98229
8/22/20, 5:23 AM
i love this story! Great idea combining mind control and bdsm with this developing business deal. Neville is the Man -- perfectly planned and executed take-over. And so hot every step of the way. i couldn't help but think that i would gladly give up my business to be owned by Master Neville. i'm with Max on this one; we both want this story to continue!! Please, Sir!