Recent Comments

8/22/20, 10:25 AM
I really enjoyed the first half with the guy on the phone. i wouldve loved to follow him as he got processed. not as into all the drag stuff though.
8/22/20, 8:31 AM
thanks appreciate that.
8/22/20, 6:01 AM
Hi Kyle, I can't promise a set time. But like I said, it was meant to be one single chapter, and I decided to split it because it was already getting really lengthy. So for the second half of this chapter, I'd say that I have maybe over half of it written down already. The rest of the plot is already planned out, but I just need to focus on writing it out. So I sure hope it won't have to be long, but I don't want to commit to you guys and then not be able to deliver. Thanks for your patience and stay tuned! :)
8/22/20, 5:59 AM
oh my gaaaaad we have an update!!!
boi98229
8/22/20, 5:23 AM
i love this story! Great idea combining mind control and bdsm with this developing business deal. Neville is the Man -- perfectly planned and executed take-over. And so hot every step of the way. i couldn't help but think that i would gladly give up my business to be owned by Master Neville. i'm with Max on this one; we both want this story to continue!! Please, Sir!
8/22/20, 4:53 AM
The growth and transformation stuff in this story is hot AF! I really hope to see more! And what if big Richard ends up being a gigantic bottom? He has a massive ass to die for! Anyway, love the transformative elements and how you describe and write them out! Also... no such thing as too big!
8/22/20, 4:21 AM
Great story....are there more chapters to follow?
boi98229
8/22/20, 4:11 AM
Thanks Willie, Good story; nice twist. The twist made the mind control seem more potent. Check your link to Jesse coming out of the shower. The link is broken. You might want to consider putting your images up on bdsmlr.com instead of counting on tumblr.
8/22/20, 4:01 AM
Superb creative writing! I was aroused the whole time and wanted to read more and more. The hypnosis angle at the end was a surprise. Great job, I want to read more from you!
Anonymous
8/22/20, 3:45 AM
Hoping for oral in werewolf form.