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Anonymous
8/22/20, 3:45 AM
Hoping for oral in werewolf form.
Anonymous
8/22/20, 3:29 AM
Woahhhh this is so SO good at showing his changed mindset in a realistic-feeling way. Awesome stuff.
8/22/20, 3:20 AM
Can you give an estimate when you might post the next part? Glad to know that you still have ideas for this series and havent abandoned it at all
8/22/20, 3:00 AM
Thanks guys! Glad to hear you guys still enjoying this story! @Kyle Chu: About the piss drinking...remember this is just first part of this installment...stay tuned in the second part of it! ;) As for your idea of a look into the future....it's not on my mind for what I've planned for the series, but it's an idea that I could park it in the back of my mind. I might consider it in the future if I could think of something interesting to put together. Thanks for the suggestion anyway!
8/22/20, 1:23 AM
I can't believe we got an update! I really enjoyed this chapter so much. I like how we saw the Stantons again this chapter, really love the tongue bath detail that they now have to do and I like the character development on Zaid. I hope we get to see the team exercise between the baseball and soccer team in the near future!
8/22/20, 12:24 AM
love this series. Wonder if its possible to create a formula like it
8/22/20, 12:01 AM
are you going to write more stories bc yours are my fav and i wish i coild read more of them
Aug 21, 2020
Baple
8/21/20, 11:58 PM
Great story! I love seeing your uploads So jealous of your victims
8/21/20, 11:37 PM
So awesome to get this update! It totally made my day. Love to see the Stantons are still enslaved and completely dedicated to their tasks, I really missed them so much! I also like the soccer takedown, it was super duper HOT! I kinda miss the piss drinking stuff, though. It kinda make sense too for Neil to want to "recycle" his drug. I dont know if you take suggestions, but in later chapters can you do a time jump? Like lets see how these people are like 15 years or so later, still under Neil's control That would be fantastic.
8/21/20, 11:31 PM
Once again, such a nice work! I enjoyed every paragraph, every scene, every dialog. I wasn't expecting Jake to shapeshift, but I should have learned by now, you are full of surprises... very pleasant surprises! I can't wait to see where this goes next! I hope you'll continue to write and I hope there are many more chapters to come and many more stories to come as well. Keep up the good work ;-)