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8/21/20, 11:31 PM
Once again, such a nice work! I enjoyed every paragraph, every scene, every dialog. I wasn't expecting Jake to shapeshift, but I should have learned by now, you are full of surprises... very pleasant surprises! I can't wait to see where this goes next! I hope you'll continue to write and I hope there are many more chapters to come and many more stories to come as well. Keep up the good work ;-)
8/21/20, 11:27 PM
yes! Lovely to see you posting again! yes, yes yes!
Anonymous
8/21/20, 11:17 PM
OMG, this is soo good!! Thank you so much for writing this! I mainly go to this site to enjoy big-sub-small-top stories, but never did i know that i also enjoy skillfully written identity theft story! the slow but sure manipulation as well as the rise to power from cabin boy to officer makes my little buddy hard throughout reading this!! =) thanks again! I will be sure to regularly check for your work!
8/21/20, 11:03 PM
@Lusty Stallion - Thanks bro! I really like to just set it up and then let the characters tell me what they're gonna do. That's one of the weird parts of using the AI, is sometimes the characters legit come up with something totally different than I expected. If it's hot, I just go with it. This one's only chapter 14. Fifteen's tomorrow, but it's already written. I'm working on 16 now, which is sort of where it all comes together. Then one more for good measure, and we'll be wrapped.
Lusty Stallion
8/21/20, 10:45 PM
Nailed it again. That idols got a mind of its own. Love the fact you're discovering the story as you write in anongst a larger plan. Thanks for these 15 chapters. We're lovin' them!
8/21/20, 10:36 PM
Owen needs vision and a big screen smart TV stat. he could ruin ALL of the fun! but NO... that's making the game too easy... I like this 'long haul' play that Jake's got going on. I am SO here for this series and you continue to deliver excellently each installment!
8/21/20, 9:40 PM
so the balloon lead to the self inflation, the measuring tape led to the "snake" growth. simple household items leading to changes... need to find connect something finding clothes for the behemoth, and maybe something less to lead to the expansion of the property so it's more fitting to Richard's current build
Anonymous
8/21/20, 9:38 PM
super hot. hope theres more
8/21/20, 8:54 PM
will we see a new part soon?
Anonymous
8/21/20, 8:40 PM
loved this!