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8/21/20, 8:13 PM
Would love to see more of Benji! I echo the comment above that would be super hot
8/21/20, 7:56 PM
I see, so let's see what happens to them in two chapters
8/21/20, 7:52 PM
@darkblade2814 - Good question. I think it only affected these three. I expect to see a couple of the untransformed firefighters show up for chapter 16, but I just barely started writing it, so let’s find out what happens together. (I have a plan when I write, but I’m pretty seat-of-my-pants when it comes to certain details.)
8/21/20, 7:46 PM
I loved this one, but I have a questions, the totem just affected them, or it affected all twelve? if it went to all of them, will we see the others in their snippet?
8/21/20, 7:38 PM
Really enjoyed it. I like this version of corrupted Peter, he's being the dominant one but he's not being super aggressive about it. Symbiotes, mind control, and a protagonist who is becoming more powerful is definitely pushing the right buttons for me. Looking forward to the next chapter.
8/21/20, 6:55 PM
@anon - That's... kinda tempting. The downside is that the AI really isn't great at plot, though it really excels in descriptions. The farther we get into this, the more that having a memory and being able to structure a plot matters. I'm planning on doing a forum thread once this is all wrapped to talk about the experience of writing with AI... might attach something like that as an example of the naive approach to letting AI handle it.
Anonymous
8/21/20, 5:56 PM
obviously you know how your own story will end but i think there could be some entertainment value in doing an alternative ending chapter where you follow where the AI takes you to determine how things turn out. Obviously overriding totally crazy stuff like spontaneous and senseless stabbings but other than that letting the AI create an alternative end ;)
Anonymous
8/21/20, 5:54 PM
If gay-to-straight doesn’t do it for you, maybe set that as a blocked tag for your profile. The whole aim of that functionality is to allow each of us to tailor the site so that we don’t see fetishes we aren’t interested in
8/21/20, 5:35 PM
Clever concept and sexy execution--can't wait for more!
8/21/20, 5:33 PM
That story was so fucking hot! Maybe the next story could give the narrator a massive booty with an extra sensitive, extra stretchy hole that can take Richards massive meat?