Recent Comments

8/21/20, 3:09 PM
i love this so much. So many things you could do to build this world. Would love to see more of Benji, perhaps from the POV of his new daddy, maybe a friend of his tracks him down after his transformation and gets ensnared by the school too?
8/21/20, 3:00 PM
I like the twist of him only regaining his intelligence when he gets aroused -- fresh angle on the dumbing-down genre.
8/21/20, 1:49 PM
I'm enjoying this series, especially the vignette chapters. So often mc stories focus on the transformation and not the altered reality. These chapters give the reader a view of the changed lives of Vanilla's citizens. My favorite scene was the bonding between the two beach bros. I look forward to what comes next. Excellent work!
Andrew
8/21/20, 12:18 PM
fuck dude! such a shot story, cant wait to see what happens next
8/21/20, 12:12 PM
I really like your writing and you have excellent ideas. Keep up the fantastic work Yama xx
8/21/20, 11:33 AM
All-around terrific story! It's been a hot minute since I read it, but it has all my favorite bits -- muscle, spandex, wrestling, mind-fucking. It's awesome!
Anonymous
8/21/20, 10:37 AM
it would be so hot if you added twins to the story!!!!
Anonymous
8/21/20, 10:35 AM
I can't believe I missed this! What an interesting story - I really hope you keep writing!