Recent Comments

8/21/20, 6:39 AM
@Lusty Stallion - Thanks man! It's a challenge, because there are certain scenes I want to write, except it makes no sense for the stranger to be there, so I just tuck 'em away until I get to a vignette chapter. I hope they've been working to help give the story a sense of pacing and structure. I know that, for me, it's kind of a treat, and I find myself looking forward to them. To be honest, I don't know how long Chef Pablo is gonna need the special ingredient. There are only four chapters left, and somethings going down in Vanilla.
Lusty Stallion
8/21/20, 6:28 AM
Thanks man, I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes
May 10, 2018
Anonymous
8/21/20, 6:17 AM
this story is a classic
Lusty Stallion
8/21/20, 6:04 AM
Thanks for embelishing the world man. It's great seeing what's happening when our hero isn't around, the consequences of the transformations. I hope he keeps supplying chef Pablo with his special ingredient and cream. Can't wait to see what happens with the idol
8/21/20, 4:36 AM
I just missed the options, the numbers usually helps (at least to me to see them lol)
8/21/20, 4:05 AM
I like it! but it all went so fast for me. I don't know, maybe is just me, but I enjoy some descriptions of how dumb the guys have become, along with some juicy description. But I like it, its a very good story.
Jul 6, 2015
Willie Cici
8/21/20, 4:00 AM
I re-read my story, after I read the comment. I don't think there is a continuation, but if anyone has ideas or recommendations, please list them here in the comments. Thanks.
8/21/20, 1:30 AM
Damn it. I wanted it to end this way, Eddie free and Andrew stuck as the happy, horny himbo that he was clearly born to be. But I would have fucking killed Matt for what he did, so it went down pretty sour when Eddie went and pulled the same asshole move. It's crazy to bitch about consent on a site devoted to mind control, but it really seemed like Andrew would have chosen to stay a himbo if he'd had the chance. Oh well, I guess the rest of the commenters liked it.
8/21/20, 1:29 AM
this is such a hottt story. Hope it keeps going.