Recent Comments

8/20/20, 3:09 PM
Can this be a series uhm so deeply into it GREAT work. 😈💪
8/20/20, 2:58 PM
I second the request for a sequel with Trent.
8/20/20, 2:19 PM
Took the whole story in and then BAM, what a twist. What a great storyline and descriptive writing. I felt like I was in the bar & hotel room. Keep up the great writing!
Bark
8/20/20, 12:01 PM
Yeah this is one of the hottest stories I have read on this site, thank you for continuing. i just love the loss of control .
8/20/20, 10:28 AM
Just noticed the detail of Levi taking the bus and walking past what he called Mr braxtons cars in the end. Love the small details!
8/20/20, 9:57 AM
well...Blaine may be an asshole but he also is my spirit animal. That story is an exact fantasy of mine. great job. hot and well written. btw,I can feel a spin-off on the horizon with Blaine,James and some of his clients
8/20/20, 6:04 AM
Well, I can edit the story to bring it back, guess I'm gonna do it right now. But even with the first published version of this chapter, there was 1. start training Daniel. 2. take revenge on the neighbors and 3. Maybe there is something to do with Will. Now, 2 and 3 are inverted. I just haven't used clear numbers to signifies the choices. Never did, so why is the remarks coming only now?
8/20/20, 5:34 AM
This is INCREDIBLE! I love inflation and musclegut stories. Amazing stuff! :)
mikem
8/20/20, 4:41 AM
Hot story.. Well written, hot subjects. would luv to see more. thanks.
8/20/20, 4:23 AM
@Rich56 - You know, I'm just putting the polish on tomorrows chapter. Marco's fate is already sealed, but Carlos only shows up for a single line, so I've pushed him a little in your direction.