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7/6/25, 2:09 AM
I think I know who this is as it's incredibly smart, inventive, fun, well-written, and, most importantly, hot has hell. So excited for more!
7/6/25, 2:01 AM
Karim should also be added to the story, especially how he was turned into a slave and he resists) because of his faith. And it would also be interesting if Todd took up Karim's family when they discovered oddities in Karim and that he might be under someone's control. I also liked the idea that sometimes Todd loosens the grip of hypnosis so that his slaves can communicate with each other. Perhaps Todd is training them in such a way that he can control them without hypnosis and so that they do everything he asks voluntarily.
7/6/25, 1:58 AM
Thank you for continuing this story, I liked it before. Honestly, I don't want a sequel. But I would like to see more interactions between Todd and his "boyfriend's" dad and uncle in the sequel, especially I would like to see and learn more about the hypnosis process and the sex (slave transformation) of the uncle and Scott's dad. I hope you will reveal more of this in the sequel, it would be really hot to see a threesome (then with the twin dads) and I would also like to see pictures of the characters with the help of artificial intelligence (AI) in slavery). I think it would be interesting to add also secret sex, where they fuck in public or next to the wife (Frank) while she is talking on the phone or where Scott's dad gives Todd a blowjob under the table? How do you like the ideas? Let's hope the sequel won't be long in coming)!
7/6/25, 12:46 AM
Great start, looking forward to the next chapters
7/5/25, 11:50 PM
I have to admit, I got a laugh out of Hayden demonstrating enough independence of thought only to want a White Claw lol. Very hot as usual, Bovine, I can't wait for the next chapter!

7/6/25, 12:18 AM
@[Mindwinder](/user/show/296830) Hayden is a really fun main character because he can’t break out Daddy Musk Hypnosis to save himself from a life of enslavement, BUT he can break out of it to purchase one of the most douchebag-coded drinks known to man. (Jk I actually like Whiteclaw. Maybe I can ge them to do a brand partnership with this series)
Zander
7/5/25, 11:50 PM
Great continuation, a lot of things are becoming clear little by little. I liked how you reveal the characters and their past as well as the present. I look forward to the continuation of the story from Lucen, Elias and Theo. Will they fully unravel the secret of Veil and learn his plans and scale in order to stop him?
Noris
7/5/25, 11:19 PM
Hi, when will there be a continuation of this wonderful story)?
7/5/25, 8:18 AM
the writing is pretty charming! id love to read more reality altering stuff by you

7/5/25, 9:06 PM
@[panpan](/user/show/501137) Charming is the perfect adjective for who I *think* this author is 👀
7/5/25, 8:49 PM
Great story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Anonymous
7/5/25, 8:00 PM
Need more!! Make some big sub small dom action please!! Maybe a lil beefy bulky bodybuilders that love getting topped by super smart twinks!!