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Lusty Stallion
8/19/20, 9:38 PM
Fuck. Is this where the strangers powers came from. Did he know about the idol before? Is this why he's here or has it drawn him here? Will he head to the cavern to investigate? What will he use the idol for? If it did that too the bearded 30 something, darkening the sky & hovering red lightening, what's it going to do to our favourite fetish shop owner? Man, this took it to a new level!!!
8/19/20, 9:23 PM
I'm just eager to see them, sorry if it sound like I'm demanding, I'm not, I will try to express my eagerness better
8/19/20, 9:22 PM
Once again, thank you Martin! Also, there is a longer version containing humiliation as the base version. Don't know what's the unpublished edit is all about, both version seem published from what I'm seeing.
Zac
8/19/20, 9:19 PM
Love it! The subjects moaning "I SUBMIT" when their programming is complete is HOT! Sorry we missed the recruitment of the brother and dad, and would have loved some added sex between the subjects.
8/19/20, 9:15 PM
@darkblade2814 - Impatient, huh? We'll get to them.
8/19/20, 9:07 PM
I'm very confused by the slippage in gender pronouns and signifiers when describing Alexei. Is this an adaptation of an M/F or F/F story that needs more editing?
Martin
8/19/20, 8:55 PM
@UchihaDEMS: Since you didn't seem to respond, I published and approved this story in your community series, I hope you don't mind. Let me know if you have any objections. Martin.
Swizzington
8/19/20, 7:47 PM
Actually, of all the things you listed, the only one that doesn't interest me is musky smells. Indeed, shaving is one of my main interests :-)
8/19/20, 7:41 PM
All fair critiques, Swizzington. But I think this story's going for fetishes that you're not really into, not only shaving and body hair, but also musky smells, muscle, and cum. It also doesn't have a humiliation element, which I know is something that you tend to include, but that is a real turn-off for me. Literally, I think it's different strokes for different folks!
8/19/20, 7:16 PM
The punishment 'Ding' was a great plot device! Loved the story!