Recent Comments

8/20/20, 6:04 AM
Well, I can edit the story to bring it back, guess I'm gonna do it right now. But even with the first published version of this chapter, there was 1. start training Daniel. 2. take revenge on the neighbors and 3. Maybe there is something to do with Will. Now, 2 and 3 are inverted. I just haven't used clear numbers to signifies the choices. Never did, so why is the remarks coming only now?
8/20/20, 5:34 AM
This is INCREDIBLE! I love inflation and musclegut stories. Amazing stuff! :)
mikem
8/20/20, 4:41 AM
Hot story.. Well written, hot subjects. would luv to see more. thanks.
8/20/20, 4:23 AM
@Rich56 - You know, I'm just putting the polish on tomorrows chapter. Marco's fate is already sealed, but Carlos only shows up for a single line, so I've pushed him a little in your direction.
8/20/20, 4:16 AM
Okay, I finally got over my confusion! The name Alexei really threw me, because it's definitely a man's name, and when combined with a thick Slavic accent barking orders, I kept picturing a male Russian bodybuilder whenever I saw Alexei's name.
Drake Nightstrom
8/20/20, 4:02 AM
@Cutlerfan I am glad you liked it. I wanted a way for the reader to sort of know something was happening without having to write the exact words every time it came up.
Anonymous
8/20/20, 3:52 AM
is there going to be more of this story?
8/20/20, 3:14 AM
This story has been so amazing, I wish I lived in that town. I have a gainer fetish, so I'd like to see Chef Pablo get off on fattening Carlos and Marco by transformed them from muscular, tatted chefs (as I imagine them) into fat slovenly pigs who can't stop eating the "special" chocolates.
Jun 13, 2017
8/20/20, 2:17 AM
Just went back to refresh myself on this story. Wow! Love it!
8/20/20, 1:37 AM
What a chapter ........ I NEED to read more .....