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8/19/20, 5:03 PM
@anon Thanks - you'll find a few underwear fetishes scattered throughout the story.
Anonymous
8/19/20, 4:56 PM
I’m a massive fan of some of your “homage” pieces so it pains me to say this, but in this instance I’m not sure you’ve hit the mark. I get that you’re trying to capture the essence of the original work and condense it down to a shorter story, but the reduced work count means that key story beats end up feeling rushed
Swizzington
8/19/20, 4:48 PM
Tom, probably not :-) My philosophy is: "write the stories you would enjoy reading," and personally, I don't like stories that have photos attached. I find it distracting. Plus I like to give the reader wiggle room in how they imagine the characters.
Tom
8/19/20, 4:36 PM
Dunno if this is possible, would you ever consider including some photos every now and again in your stories? Just some standard ones from google/websites that show how the outfit could potentially look?
8/19/20, 4:10 PM
This second chapter was really hot to read. I hope you keep making new chapter's. I want to know who the mystery person is at the end.
Anonymous
8/19/20, 3:45 PM
Great story Perhaps you could include underwear/lingerie fetishes or an abdl twist
Anonymous
8/19/20, 3:22 PM
Very hot man! Glad to see you back and writing, hope to see more soon!
8/19/20, 2:33 PM
really good story so far. please continue with the next chapter.
MKT
8/19/20, 12:40 PM
omg , that the word.. i want be trent.. is there sequel for it .. the dumding down fucking hot but you dont go down too far , hopefully you will pull out his logical thinking all at once if there is sequel
Michal
8/19/20, 12:36 PM
Damn, this is a fantastic addition to your already amazing list of stories. James' fall from grace is such a turn on. I've never seen anyone do stories like this since Kyle Cicero. Never change!