Recent Comments

Swizzington
8/19/20, 2:27 AM
@little tiny tim: there will not be a chapter 4. This was the conclusion. Although, I may definitely do another story in this universe! Writing these slow hypnotic inductions has been a fun challenge :-)
8/19/20, 2:26 AM
Looking forward to the next lesson !!!
8/19/20, 2:24 AM
I'v been enjoying this story...I'd love it if in chapter 4, Blaine decided to get a little more 'kinky' & embed some interesting fetish's in these guys. It would also be interesting if he fucked with their 'past' memories, etc [???]
EntrancedGay92
8/19/20, 2:02 AM
I was honestly shocked James fell under Blaine's control. I was thinking James would be the real mastermind. His downfall was hot and I like that you leave the reader to imagine what happens when the boys are under Blaine's control initially. Good work!
8/19/20, 1:24 AM
Great storyline and build-up! Your creative writing kept be glued (and hard) to the story and I felt like I was there with Ryan and Conner. Keep up the great work and I want to read more about the cops!
8/19/20, 1:22 AM
Kool be interesting to see Blaine. And one of my ideas actually made it into the story.
8/19/20, 1:10 AM
I was extremely thrilled on Blaine's overall success with the story! I don't care that the sex seemed tacked on, I don't come here for the sex anyways, I'm here for the fucking hot mental subversions and inductions and you are my FUCKING CANDY for it. Never change. The layers of different controllers is something I note often in your longer works and I can't say I'm displeased. The depth of the control going on is part of what keeps me coming back to these stories. The good boy handbook, the academy stories, all of it just ... DOES IT for me, even if the sex is really light. I wouldn't mind learning about the small cadre of gents that James pulls in on Mr. Baxton's behalf and how they fall and differently come to find service in Blaine's little empire.
CMC
8/19/20, 12:17 AM
i only wish we would get more details about Blaine's makeover of the boys! It's my favorite part.
8/19/20, 12:10 AM
Honestly, I was really hoping James would put Blaine in his place. This site has so many stories where the "villain" ultimately wins. The end of the last chapter kind of gave me the impression that James would take Blaine down, but that could have just been because that's what I had hoped. The writing was above average, but the outcome was disappointing in my opinion. I do hope to see more of your writing in the future, hopefully with an outcome that isn't so bleak.
The_Supernatural_D
8/19/20, 12:05 AM
This is resonating with me in ways I wasn't expecting. I think I know what that means...