Recent Comments

CMC
8/19/20, 12:17 AM
i only wish we would get more details about Blaine's makeover of the boys! It's my favorite part.
8/19/20, 12:10 AM
Honestly, I was really hoping James would put Blaine in his place. This site has so many stories where the "villain" ultimately wins. The end of the last chapter kind of gave me the impression that James would take Blaine down, but that could have just been because that's what I had hoped. The writing was above average, but the outcome was disappointing in my opinion. I do hope to see more of your writing in the future, hopefully with an outcome that isn't so bleak.
The_Supernatural_D
8/19/20, 12:05 AM
This is resonating with me in ways I wasn't expecting. I think I know what that means...
8/19/20, 12:00 AM
@tomozco - Oh, there are still a few more dominos that need to fall. I hope you’ll keep reading to find out. @jammers - Thanks, that gives me some ideas. Probably not gonna have him change too much more, but I definitely wanna show him off in those around town. @Lusty Stallion - There’s one spot coming up where a crowd transformation *might* work, but I won’t be sure til I try to write it.
Swizzington
8/18/20, 11:38 PM
Thanks for your feedback on the writing styles. I hadn't realized it was *that* noticeable, but that's good to know! I'll have to keep that in mind for future collaborations
Anonymous
8/18/20, 11:31 PM
I can't say I wasn't disappointed with the direction this part took. I really don't like Blaine - he's far too arrogant and cocky. I was hoping James would be able to knock him down a peg or two as the older, more experienced hypnotist. The sex scene is nice, but it did feel out of place. Like the comment above mine, I agree that it didn't feel that integrated into the story. You can clearly perceive the difference in writing styles between authors there. The sex itself also fell a bit short for me. It focused on Blaine's pleasure (for obvious reasons) and this could be my dislike for the character talking but I would have liked to see some more attention towards the buildup of James's, Austin's, and Levi's pleasure in obeying and their own climaxes. Still, overall the story was very well written, especially the induction and hypnotic scenes. I did enjoy this series, and my favorite is probably the first part (Austin's induction scene is just written so well). These are just my personal opinions of course, and I hope you continue to write more stories!
Anonymous
8/18/20, 11:12 PM
excellent
8/18/20, 10:58 PM
Wonderful...
Swizzington
8/18/20, 10:56 PM
Woohoo! Glad you guys enjoyed it! :-)