Recent Comments

8/19/20, 12:00 AM
@tomozco - Oh, there are still a few more dominos that need to fall. I hope you’ll keep reading to find out. @jammers - Thanks, that gives me some ideas. Probably not gonna have him change too much more, but I definitely wanna show him off in those around town. @Lusty Stallion - There’s one spot coming up where a crowd transformation *might* work, but I won’t be sure til I try to write it.
Swizzington
8/18/20, 11:38 PM
Thanks for your feedback on the writing styles. I hadn't realized it was *that* noticeable, but that's good to know! I'll have to keep that in mind for future collaborations
Anonymous
8/18/20, 11:31 PM
I can't say I wasn't disappointed with the direction this part took. I really don't like Blaine - he's far too arrogant and cocky. I was hoping James would be able to knock him down a peg or two as the older, more experienced hypnotist. The sex scene is nice, but it did feel out of place. Like the comment above mine, I agree that it didn't feel that integrated into the story. You can clearly perceive the difference in writing styles between authors there. The sex itself also fell a bit short for me. It focused on Blaine's pleasure (for obvious reasons) and this could be my dislike for the character talking but I would have liked to see some more attention towards the buildup of James's, Austin's, and Levi's pleasure in obeying and their own climaxes. Still, overall the story was very well written, especially the induction and hypnotic scenes. I did enjoy this series, and my favorite is probably the first part (Austin's induction scene is just written so well). These are just my personal opinions of course, and I hope you continue to write more stories!
Anonymous
8/18/20, 11:12 PM
excellent
8/18/20, 10:58 PM
Wonderful...
Swizzington
8/18/20, 10:56 PM
Woohoo! Glad you guys enjoyed it! :-)
8/18/20, 10:28 PM
Really loved the battle of wills between Blaine and James. But everything after that felt a little anticlimactic to me. Perhaps for obvious reasons, the sex scene didn't feel that integrated into the rest of the story. Overall, though, this is still a really well-written work, all 25000 words of it.
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
8/18/20, 10:21 PM
I'm very open to idea of using a headset for hypnosis. Does anyone have suggestions for any brand that is better than another? Also, what about programs for them? Thanks.