Recent Comments

8/18/20, 4:35 PM
@Jockmorphr - Thanks man. Credit where it’s due, @Delicious1papaya came up with the weather fetish idea. @Delicious1papaya - hopefully I did the idea justice! @Edlam - Thanks man, that’s so cool of you to say. Really appreciate it. I’m having a ton of fun writing it.
8/18/20, 4:24 PM
Short but very hot. I can see this becoming more if so inclined to expand upon it.
Tom
8/18/20, 4:22 PM
Ah that makes sense, especially seeing what happened the next day when he arrived back at his house! Does make it hotter knowning it was back to being tucked in! :)
Swizzington
8/18/20, 3:59 PM
Tom, I had strongly considered that, but in the end decided that, yeah, that might have been a little much, particularly as I was trying to emphasize Levi's total obliviousness to what had just happened to him If it helps though, in my mind, his shirt was tucked in at that point. He just didn't notice :-)
Tom
8/18/20, 3:45 PM
Loved this story so far! I was wondering if it might have made Levis induction even hotter if, after he stood up/had watched the footage his top button had become done up and his shirt shirt had been tucked in. Maybe mentioned by Austin or even himself when he had gone to eat the soup/caught his reflection on something? Perhaps that might have been to much though!
giveintothemusk
8/18/20, 3:39 PM
Swizzy gets the people goin
8/18/20, 3:00 PM
A great continuation! Thank you for writing this. I feel your writing is stronger than my imagination - so I'd be pretty interested in how the prequel plays out. The comments lay out some interesting points, but I'm a little disappointed by how people tie eroticism so narrowly with their own personal tastes. While I find characters like Blaine hot, I get that not it's not for everyone - but surely the solution is to find a story better suited to the things you do like?
8/18/20, 1:02 PM
This is already becoming such an iconic series! Keep up the amazing work!!!
8/18/20, 12:53 PM
Hot damn! I loved reading about a furry ir of dad tits, and I loved how it wasn't just a lead in to sex.
Helloitsme
8/18/20, 12:26 PM
I'm excited to see what happens oooh baby! As long as its ends with some very smartly dressed men with shirts tucked in and ties/bow ties I'm happy!