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8/18/20, 8:14 PM
I’ve got the blond in the jammers coming back in chapter 13. Taking ideas from the crowd: What’s the hottest thing you’d like to see happen with him?
Anonymous
8/18/20, 7:53 PM
Yeah jammers, so many possibilities. hope you will be going into each of them in more details in the next chapters. also wonder when they are going to change the towns name it really isn't vanilia anymore
Lusty Stallion
8/18/20, 7:35 PM
Loving where this is going. Very intrigued as to Brad's powers playing off Ryan's, and the fun and havoc they'll get up to in school
Jockboy
8/18/20, 7:18 PM
new here, holy shit man - this is horny af.
8/18/20, 6:42 PM
I'm loving everything about this so far. One thing that you haven't done and that I would very much enjoy would be some slow, sex-driven submission. Like, everyone else has just been enslaved pretty much instantly so far, I would love to see some mental resistance.
Drake Nightstrom
8/18/20, 5:32 PM
@MonsterMash62 That was sort of the point for the whole thing, they get to live again only as a gay man with all their old memories.
8/18/20, 4:35 PM
@Jockmorphr - Thanks man. Credit where it’s due, @Delicious1papaya came up with the weather fetish idea. @Delicious1papaya - hopefully I did the idea justice! @Edlam - Thanks man, that’s so cool of you to say. Really appreciate it. I’m having a ton of fun writing it.
8/18/20, 4:24 PM
Short but very hot. I can see this becoming more if so inclined to expand upon it.
Tom
8/18/20, 4:22 PM
Ah that makes sense, especially seeing what happened the next day when he arrived back at his house! Does make it hotter knowning it was back to being tucked in! :)
Swizzington
8/18/20, 3:59 PM
Tom, I had strongly considered that, but in the end decided that, yeah, that might have been a little much, particularly as I was trying to emphasize Levi's total obliviousness to what had just happened to him If it helps though, in my mind, his shirt was tucked in at that point. He just didn't notice :-)