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8/18/20, 7:48 AM
I thought this chapter worked a lot better than the first chapter, with some hot scenes and better pacing. I just noticed a few distracting typos (like your misuse of the word "requirement").
Ozark
8/18/20, 7:26 AM
I honestly just kinda put this story together on a whim. i was feeling horny and just kinda wrote it. lemme know what you think
Lusty Stallion
8/18/20, 6:53 AM
Thanks for a great series man! It's always a good sign when you leave your fans wanting more
8/18/20, 5:25 AM
id like more back story on how the mental changes occur. So hot! Doing a great job.
8/18/20, 5:24 AM
**Handicapping the Finals** **The players**: Blaine, the evil amateur hypnotist, has a record of 3-0 versus hypnosis unbelievers against James, hypnotherapist (record unknown). Blaine is the cocky youngster, new to hypnosis, while James is a professional hypnotherapist of many years experience. But James will be coming into this fight blind, as he does not know what has happened to Austin and Levi. **Game Plan**: James will very likely see early the dramatic physical changes to Austin and Levi, but will he be able to put 2 and 2 together b4 (pun intended) he gets ensnared? Blaine, with three servants, could just hold down James and force him to be hypnotized. Or Blaine could have James’ drinks drugged. However, Blaine’s style is to show off. He wants to prove he is the better hypnotist. Perhaps he will have Austin and Levi acting strangely and have James try to rationalize it. Perhaps Blaine will challenge James to “undo” his hypnosis. Perhaps Blaine will offer James to try to hypnotize him with Blaine reversing the roles if James does not succeed. Blaine’s endgame may not be to create another servant, but an admirer of his abilities. **Prediction**: Blaine will win by at least two touchdowns.
8/18/20, 4:22 AM
This is one of the hottest stories satisfying a kink I didn't even know I had.
Anonymous
8/18/20, 4:10 AM
I'd love to see all of Levi's induction from an omniscient viewpoint
8/18/20, 3:53 AM
the werewolf is a hot twist! this story is wild and i wanna see all the places you take it S you corrupt the characters and the readers
Willie Cici
8/18/20, 3:38 AM
Incredible!! I read it twice to make sure I didn't miss anything. Wonderfully written (the writing and the editing, which is 80% of good writing, in my opinion). I am anticipating a great finish.
8/18/20, 3:05 AM
Great start, excited to see where it goes