Recent Comments

1/7/25, 12:06 AM
I agree. Story is VERY hot and does hit all the buttons. And a compliment from Jack Parker is a gold medal cause all his stories are so hot. Congrats!!

1/7/25, 1:32 AM
@[Piper163](/user/show/10021261) Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. And yeah all of Jack's stories are amazing. Have you checked out his Telegram? He has lots of great content there, and has built a really fun community.
1/7/25, 1:31 AM
Amazing hot story! I hope there is more!
1/6/25, 10:09 PM
I don’t usually comment but I really like your story, it’s a shame it hasn’t been updated but it still works with what it has now. I hope you are in a position to be able to but either way you did great.
1/6/25, 6:03 AM
I’m loving it. Can’t wait for Colton to join in and get a piece of the action!

1/6/25, 9:47 PM
@[Tommy B](/user/show/10022728) Haha I'm looking forward to getting Colton more involved myself. I'm glad you're liking the story.
1/6/25, 4:51 AM
There are story lines I like and some I don't. This one hit all my buttons. I can barely wait for the next chapter.

1/6/25, 9:46 PM
@[Grathocke](/user/show/10008532) I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and commenting. I'm starting work on chapter 2, and I hope to have it up sooner rather than later. Fingers crossed :)
1/6/25, 4:58 PM
love it!!! missed ur stories so much

1/6/25, 8:19 PM
@[revenge88fics](/user/show/917832) Thank you very much. :-) I'll try to keep going with more stories, I have quite a few ideas but sometimes life gets in the way.
1/6/25, 8:16 PM
Oh, this is gonna be good. Running out now to stock up on microwave popcorn.
1/5/25, 9:33 PM
Keep going down that rabbit hole Frank! Go home and cum from having the rubber cock in your ass. And then realize it isn't enough. You need the real thing. And you need it now. And right back into Rick's hands. And personally, I hope Rick has Frank in chastity by the end of this.

1/5/25, 11:22 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) If it's a re-imagining of Gayngsters then Rick will lose control and desperately try to fix things and then the credits will roll, so to speak, without resolution ;)

1/6/25, 7:49 AM
@[anarchomegalomaniac](/user/show/907794) :rofl: I run out of steam on that one. :innocent: Mind you, while I was thinking of remastering that story I ended up writing this one instead.

1/6/25, 7:50 AM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) you are not too far off the mark! :-)

1/6/25, 10:26 AM
@[jsmith2000](/user/show/10006112) Your fans recognized the motifs. I’m loving it. Missed your writing. “Cmon gay boy, show your lover how to cum.” From Gayngsters is embedded in my perverted mind forever.

1/6/25, 8:16 PM
@[BarefootForever](/user/show/783752) Knowing that there is someone out there that is enjoying my stories is what makes me want to write more. :-)
1/6/25, 9:37 AM
Na, dann lassen wir uns mal überraschen, wie das weitergeht. Ich mag beide Perspektiven lesen :)

1/6/25, 7:21 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) @[LockedTom98](/user/show/10044527) Danke Euch beiden für die positiven Rückmeldungen. Es ist ein neuer Versuch, eine Geschichte aus zwei Blickwinkeln zu betrachten. Der nächste Teil wird aber wohl doch erstmal bei den Zwillingen sein, denn da ist die Storyline schon konkreter in meiner kleinen schmutzigen Phantasie. :nerd_face:
Anonymous
1/6/25, 8:19 AM
The following content is expressed through the translation software, if there is not clear, please forgive me. There is no doubt that this is a good story, very hot. I’m a person who cares about the logic of the story. I found that Rocky under the master’s control very “easily” rescued Iron Claw, but the lack of rescue process, which made me very concerned. I knew that Iron Claw was probably just an insignificant cameo, rescuing him to highlight Rocky’s enslaved state. But I felt that adding “Rocky’s clash of ideas between his hero and slave status as he fights the forces of good while rescuing the villain Iron Claw” would have enriched the plot and made Rocky’s corruption even more exciting. It’s hard but it’ll be fun. In addition, I noticed that there seemed to be some repetition of the master’s words to Rocky, such as "You’re perfect… A blank slate…” I think by the end of the article the change in Black Eagle is obvious and there is no need to use “blank slate” to accommodate him. This is my personal opinion, you can ignore it, I am looking forward to the next story development.😀

1/6/25, 4:46 PM
@Anonymous thanks for the input!