I'm enjoying the story so far but I Don't like how easily Levi fell for it, idk makes him look incredibly stupid to keep watching even after witnessing first hand what it had done to his husband and takes me out of it quite a bit.

I just went back and looked at that chapter. You only mention a Matt?

Enjoyed this very much!!! I hope you continue!

Very satisfying middle chapter. Good to see Blaine has managed to establish a tighter hold over the couple, entering Levi into the fold (who may be spared the role of servant, perhaps? Judging from Blaine's treatment of him). At any rate, all that servitude, obedience, and standing at rigid attention covered all my bases, along with the changes to the couple's dynamic. Loving the control in this series. Haha my kinkier side just wants Blaine to utterly dominate this happy couple, ruthless though he be. My only qualm in this chapter is related to Levi himself. My suspension of disbelief snapped somewhat regarding his fall into hypnosis. It all happened so quickly and easily. I understand that Blaine clearly knows what he's doing, but, as Levi possesses a more skeptical mind, I thought he'd be more resistant. He's so laughably clueless in this story. In the first chapter it made perfect sense, as he was a complete denier in the power of hypnosis. I could see why he would brush off Austin's enslavement as a joke or as something impossible. Yet, as he is beat over the head countless times with stranger and stranger happenings around him, pre-hypnosis, (other than the basic suggestions) he simply continues to deny. Then, after viewing the camera, he concludes that his husband and the dorm boy are hypnotized, to the point where he will not confront his husband on this (the right choice) and feels the need to desperately contact a hypnotherapist for aid, only to revert to his hypnosis doubting standpoint when Blaine attempts to hypnotize him via the camera. I figured at this stage, shouldn't he consider hypnosis to be a very real danger? Secondly, why is he even humoring Blaine, since Blaine has been so arrogant towards him the past little while? Then the lack of resistance. I could understand how Austin was easily brought under control. Of the two, he is (or was) the more relaxed, carefree, gullible, and frankly the more suggestible one, along with being more... brawn over brains somewhat- though he has a good imagination. Levi on the other hand is the more intelligent one, (not that Austin is stupid) and is practical, organized, sharp (or so I thought), and is the more suspicious of the two, the more mental of the two. I was a little surprised that Blaine managed to scoop him up so easily. Of course I see that Levi is a bit overconfident, yet if he *was* just some oblivious, silly fool, I'd be more convinced; he seems much smarter than that, though. Anyway, as the ending implied some additional resistance, perhaps I'll be surprised. :) And, this blurb I wrote is neither a criticism nor a complaint- more like what I observed and concluded reading this. I am **loving** this series, and haven't felt this level of personal engagement for a story in a while. I'm invested. Despite what I said, the camera scene was loads of sexy fun, and my buttons are pushed in all the right ways! Tuesday couldn't come fast enough, as I'm looking forward to the sex chapter with these yummy guys, and am interested in seeing what will happen. I am curious to see what new book project Austin has been working on that has been inspired by Blaine, too. ;) Another favourite, and pretty much still a 5/5 from me. You write this all very well. Thanks!

I agree with Bobby, can we see Fenrir?

This an amazing chapter, the way we get to see Austin changes, and Levy refuses to acknowledge it all until there is no other choice are really hot. I’m really curious about James part in all, maybe a tist crash is coming? Also u mentioned it was a collaboration, can we know who are u working with in advance? In dying to know xD

please be more than 3 chapters. It will break my heart knowing that this is only 3 chapters. i would like to see more on how Blaine will corrupt the couple even more!

Clever idea and really well written. Hope there’s more to come!

you should totally continue this, it's soo great.

so hot this is shaping to be one of my favorite series on here 😍