Recent Comments

8/17/20, 12:07 AM
A rating of 5 in all categories. Intriguing story yet hot as hell, if I dare say. And I love how Heath and Tommy bonded over cock....and the cum swapping scene...all thank you, thank you.
8/16/20, 11:38 PM
This is different and very good. I usually stay away from devil and demon stories, but I going for it on this one.
8/16/20, 11:37 PM
@Jockmorphr - No worries bro. I love a good dumb down and all the variety that comes with it. I usually stick to vapid or dopey dumb guys, but I like your other ones too!
8/16/20, 11:23 PM
@Jockmorphr - Sold. I'll play with that and see if something comes out of it!
Elm
8/16/20, 11:22 PM
loved it!
Jockmorphr
8/16/20, 10:51 PM
For the camera man, perhaps a short little muscle dude with a serious voyeur fetish. Perfect for sneaking around and filming everyones perverted activities!
Swizzington
8/16/20, 10:35 PM
Glad you guys are still enjoying the story! I'm feeling relieved, I must admit. After the first chapter got such a positive reception, I was a little worried people might think this was a big letdown. :-) My aim is to have chapter 3 posted on Tuesday!
8/16/20, 10:15 PM
Im absolutely in love with this story!! It feels like its awakened a need in me to be a preppy servant myself. Can't wait to see the next chapter.
8/16/20, 10:11 PM
Thanks guys! The vignette's are really fun to put together because they sort of close out each act of the story. They also give me an excuse to revisit characters without feeling like I'm constantly having to conincidentally write them into another characters transformation. I actually haven't written tomorrow's story yet - first time all week - but I'm gonna go hit the beach for a couple hours and then pound it out. The transformation for the newsman has already been decided, but if anyone has a suggestion for his cameraman's transformation, post your ideas here in the next couple hours. Trey's doing okay, but he's so fucking horny right now. I don't have an absolute plan for him, but since you're looking for it, I suspect he'll show up in a later chapter. He almost showed up as the bottom in the porn shoot, but I thought it was more fun to bring back Sam right now. Oh, and thanks for the callout on the summary. I've submitted an updated version.
8/16/20, 9:53 PM
I love Blaine's nefarious takeover, but really, Levi has got some SERIOUS blinders on. It's wonderful, and partially explained by the NLP but it's so gleefully obvious to the reader that I just can't be mad. The introduction of James might be Blaine's undoing though, Blaine seriously DOES seem like he's way overconfident, even if aware and suspicious Levi was snagged super easily, I wonder what James will do to the dynamic? EXCELLENT as per usual. I loved it.