Recent Comments

8/16/20, 9:53 PM
I love Blaine's nefarious takeover, but really, Levi has got some SERIOUS blinders on. It's wonderful, and partially explained by the NLP but it's so gleefully obvious to the reader that I just can't be mad. The introduction of James might be Blaine's undoing though, Blaine seriously DOES seem like he's way overconfident, even if aware and suspicious Levi was snagged super easily, I wonder what James will do to the dynamic? EXCELLENT as per usual. I loved it.
8/16/20, 9:35 PM
Hello again and thanks you for this new chapter of Destination Utopia it was really amazing i love how the process go and how Noel and 107 interact between them in the pases of the procedure of the integration! cheers up and continue like that! hope we can see the next chapter soon! :D
8/16/20, 9:30 PM
Indeed, the writing is really good because it makes us care about the characters - and I know what website this is, it concerns me how many people get off on evil winning...
Anonymous
8/16/20, 9:21 PM
I wanna know how the guy in the chastity cage is doing
Anonymous
8/16/20, 9:09 PM
short description says Brent, story itself says Brett :P
Anonymous
8/16/20, 9:05 PM
And here I had thought Austin had been subtly trying to reach out to Levi trapped in his own head with the camera thing. Shame he watched the induction and didn't just turn it off
8/16/20, 9:00 PM
Your pictures of Jafar is so well written, both as 150 feet and 1500 feet!
8/16/20, 8:57 PM
this chapter was so awesome - a new beginning for the story! I have to admit that I especially loved the moment where described when Jafar was set free and what followed, the growing in all directions and his immense size and power, and how he revels in it.. wow!
Ula
8/16/20, 8:53 PM
i just love your writing!!
Martin
8/16/20, 8:51 PM
So hot! I really love this story and the subtlety, details and slowness of the process and changes! You know that you can add pictures to your story? If you don't know how to do that, I'll help you, just let me know!