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Elm
8/16/20, 11:22 PM
loved it!
Jockmorphr
8/16/20, 10:51 PM
For the camera man, perhaps a short little muscle dude with a serious voyeur fetish. Perfect for sneaking around and filming everyones perverted activities!
Swizzington
8/16/20, 10:35 PM
Glad you guys are still enjoying the story! I'm feeling relieved, I must admit. After the first chapter got such a positive reception, I was a little worried people might think this was a big letdown. :-) My aim is to have chapter 3 posted on Tuesday!
8/16/20, 10:15 PM
Im absolutely in love with this story!! It feels like its awakened a need in me to be a preppy servant myself. Can't wait to see the next chapter.
8/16/20, 10:11 PM
Thanks guys! The vignette's are really fun to put together because they sort of close out each act of the story. They also give me an excuse to revisit characters without feeling like I'm constantly having to conincidentally write them into another characters transformation. I actually haven't written tomorrow's story yet - first time all week - but I'm gonna go hit the beach for a couple hours and then pound it out. The transformation for the newsman has already been decided, but if anyone has a suggestion for his cameraman's transformation, post your ideas here in the next couple hours. Trey's doing okay, but he's so fucking horny right now. I don't have an absolute plan for him, but since you're looking for it, I suspect he'll show up in a later chapter. He almost showed up as the bottom in the porn shoot, but I thought it was more fun to bring back Sam right now. Oh, and thanks for the callout on the summary. I've submitted an updated version.
8/16/20, 9:53 PM
I love Blaine's nefarious takeover, but really, Levi has got some SERIOUS blinders on. It's wonderful, and partially explained by the NLP but it's so gleefully obvious to the reader that I just can't be mad. The introduction of James might be Blaine's undoing though, Blaine seriously DOES seem like he's way overconfident, even if aware and suspicious Levi was snagged super easily, I wonder what James will do to the dynamic? EXCELLENT as per usual. I loved it.
8/16/20, 9:35 PM
Hello again and thanks you for this new chapter of Destination Utopia it was really amazing i love how the process go and how Noel and 107 interact between them in the pases of the procedure of the integration! cheers up and continue like that! hope we can see the next chapter soon! :D
8/16/20, 9:30 PM
Indeed, the writing is really good because it makes us care about the characters - and I know what website this is, it concerns me how many people get off on evil winning...
Anonymous
8/16/20, 9:21 PM
I wanna know how the guy in the chastity cage is doing
Anonymous
8/16/20, 9:09 PM
short description says Brent, story itself says Brett :P