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Anonymous
8/16/20, 9:05 PM
And here I had thought Austin had been subtly trying to reach out to Levi trapped in his own head with the camera thing. Shame he watched the induction and didn't just turn it off
8/16/20, 9:00 PM
Your pictures of Jafar is so well written, both as 150 feet and 1500 feet!
8/16/20, 8:57 PM
this chapter was so awesome - a new beginning for the story! I have to admit that I especially loved the moment where described when Jafar was set free and what followed, the growing in all directions and his immense size and power, and how he revels in it.. wow!
Ula
8/16/20, 8:53 PM
i just love your writing!!
Martin
8/16/20, 8:51 PM
So hot! I really love this story and the subtlety, details and slowness of the process and changes! You know that you can add pictures to your story? If you don't know how to do that, I'll help you, just let me know!
Anonymous
8/16/20, 8:38 PM
awesome!!! really looking forward to the next installment.
Anonymous
8/16/20, 8:21 PM
The little details are great (e.g., how Blaine closes the door, him texting "Mr." before his name). Appreciate how much attention is paid to the writing.
Anonymous
8/16/20, 8:19 PM
I came into this chapter expecting Levi to be taken down, but I’d never have expected the CCTV induction. Pure genius! Really looking forward to seeing where the third part takes our intrepid gang of victims, especially once you throw a second hypnotist into the mix
Anonymous
8/16/20, 8:09 PM
The fact that I absolutely hate your villainous characters, and you manage to stir genuine emotion in me when all I'm trying to do is get off is a testament to how good of a writer you are. Let's hope the hypnotherapist friend manages to save the day.
Jockmorphr
8/16/20, 8:04 PM
I'm also a big fan of dumbing down, so was really happy to see it included here. TBH I also really enjoy versions on the theme: vapidness, cluelessness, gullibility, suggestibility, and just plain dopeyness. Changing how a dude's mind works without impacting their actual intelligence. I love imagining these kinds of changes and fantasizing about how they might change a character and their interaction with the world. @Derek -- I'm sharing this as conversation and not as input on the story. I've been enjoying all of the delicious mental warping and changing happening in the series!