Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/16/20, 8:21 PM
The little details are great (e.g., how Blaine closes the door, him texting "Mr." before his name). Appreciate how much attention is paid to the writing.
Anonymous
8/16/20, 8:19 PM
I came into this chapter expecting Levi to be taken down, but I’d never have expected the CCTV induction. Pure genius! Really looking forward to seeing where the third part takes our intrepid gang of victims, especially once you throw a second hypnotist into the mix
Anonymous
8/16/20, 8:09 PM
The fact that I absolutely hate your villainous characters, and you manage to stir genuine emotion in me when all I'm trying to do is get off is a testament to how good of a writer you are. Let's hope the hypnotherapist friend manages to save the day.
Jockmorphr
8/16/20, 8:04 PM
I'm also a big fan of dumbing down, so was really happy to see it included here. TBH I also really enjoy versions on the theme: vapidness, cluelessness, gullibility, suggestibility, and just plain dopeyness. Changing how a dude's mind works without impacting their actual intelligence. I love imagining these kinds of changes and fantasizing about how they might change a character and their interaction with the world. @Derek -- I'm sharing this as conversation and not as input on the story. I've been enjoying all of the delicious mental warping and changing happening in the series!
Anonymous
8/16/20, 8:02 PM
@Derek Williams I feel the same just never knew what they were called, so i figured maybe i should look it up, and with trunks you indeed get lots of drag at least with the boardshorts i used to wear ,with those extra pockets and stuff, while swimming so i'm really happy to have changed out of them a few months ago when i started swimming again. and personally i think they are more comfortable too.
Jockmorphr
8/16/20, 7:52 PM
i also really like this addition to the series. The short vignettes are a great way to move the story along while weaving the various characters' experiences together. The suspicious reporter is an excellent addition. Looking forward to reading more!
8/16/20, 7:52 PM
very sweet! i love it.
Anonymous
8/16/20, 7:47 PM
This is so good! Love the transformation. Can't wait to see where you take this in the last chapter.
8/16/20, 7:36 PM
I think the city will have two new people in the porn industry soon
8/16/20, 7:15 PM
@anon - Hah, I was wodnering if you were talking about jammers. That's what I wear when I swim. I don't feel comfortable in a brief cut when I'm swimming, but I hate the drag I get off trunks.