Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/16/20, 8:09 PM
The fact that I absolutely hate your villainous characters, and you manage to stir genuine emotion in me when all I'm trying to do is get off is a testament to how good of a writer you are. Let's hope the hypnotherapist friend manages to save the day.
Jockmorphr
8/16/20, 8:04 PM
I'm also a big fan of dumbing down, so was really happy to see it included here. TBH I also really enjoy versions on the theme: vapidness, cluelessness, gullibility, suggestibility, and just plain dopeyness. Changing how a dude's mind works without impacting their actual intelligence. I love imagining these kinds of changes and fantasizing about how they might change a character and their interaction with the world. @Derek -- I'm sharing this as conversation and not as input on the story. I've been enjoying all of the delicious mental warping and changing happening in the series!
Anonymous
8/16/20, 8:02 PM
@Derek Williams I feel the same just never knew what they were called, so i figured maybe i should look it up, and with trunks you indeed get lots of drag at least with the boardshorts i used to wear ,with those extra pockets and stuff, while swimming so i'm really happy to have changed out of them a few months ago when i started swimming again. and personally i think they are more comfortable too.
Jockmorphr
8/16/20, 7:52 PM
i also really like this addition to the series. The short vignettes are a great way to move the story along while weaving the various characters' experiences together. The suspicious reporter is an excellent addition. Looking forward to reading more!
8/16/20, 7:52 PM
very sweet! i love it.
Anonymous
8/16/20, 7:47 PM
This is so good! Love the transformation. Can't wait to see where you take this in the last chapter.
8/16/20, 7:36 PM
I think the city will have two new people in the porn industry soon
8/16/20, 7:15 PM
@anon - Hah, I was wodnering if you were talking about jammers. That's what I wear when I swim. I don't feel comfortable in a brief cut when I'm swimming, but I hate the drag I get off trunks.
Swizzington
8/16/20, 7:10 PM
To be honest, this story doesn't really dive deeply into Blaine's motivations. But I am definitely considering writing more stories (possibly a prequel) with the character, so that might be explained in future :-)
8/16/20, 7:00 PM
Swizzington, I entirely agree with your comment. Write what you want to see put out there, not to please a fickle audience. I have read a few of your stories, and I enjoy them no matter how they resolve themselves. I am curious as to why our young hypnotist is so cold-blooded, but I suppose that will be explained in future chapters.