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Swizzington
8/16/20, 7:10 PM
To be honest, this story doesn't really dive deeply into Blaine's motivations. But I am definitely considering writing more stories (possibly a prequel) with the character, so that might be explained in future :-)
8/16/20, 7:00 PM
Swizzington, I entirely agree with your comment. Write what you want to see put out there, not to please a fickle audience. I have read a few of your stories, and I enjoy them no matter how they resolve themselves. I am curious as to why our young hypnotist is so cold-blooded, but I suppose that will be explained in future chapters.
Anonymous
8/16/20, 6:56 PM
love those short scenes of how everyone is settling in there new lives can't wait for how the reporter and cameraman turns out. This series is turning into one of mine favorites on this site
Anonymous
8/16/20, 6:51 PM
@Derek Williams Nice can't wait for the swimmer just fond out the trunks are called jammers keep up the good writing
Anonymous
8/16/20, 6:49 PM
excellent
Anonymous
8/16/20, 6:23 PM
Please please *please* continue this - this is one of the hottest stories on here.
8/16/20, 5:45 PM
I love his internal conflicts and thoughts. Thoughtful and amazing!
Swizzington
8/16/20, 5:38 PM
Kyle Chu, I have published two stories since *Slave Academy: The Resistance*, and what you are describing did not happen in either of them. Indeed, it did not happen in many of my older stories also. It does not seem sensible, based on the evidence, to jump to that conclusion at this stage. I am not trying to appease anyone. I am writing the stories I want to write. If you enjoy my work, great! If you don't, there are many other fantastic authors on this site for you to enjoy. It's really that simple.
8/16/20, 5:11 PM
There's no doubt that Swizzington knows how to write a great, mind control story but just like a lot of people, I'm concerned about how he'll stick with the landing, but in the complete opposite direction though. I love Swizz's imagination and he can concoct a twisted, erotically dark story, but I'm worried that this is another "The Resistance" ending scenario where he tries to please "both sides" of his fandom and end up writing a lackluster conclusion. Going by how Swizz ended his previous stories before, I'm assuming a third party character will swoop in and enslave Blaine somehow in order to give some form of "justice" for his "morally righteous" fans while keeping Levi and Austin enslaved too to please everyone else. I seriously wish you don't go towards this route again, Swizz!
Helloitsme
8/16/20, 5:02 PM
Just fantastic! So excited for chapter 2 and 3!!