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Jockmorphr
8/16/20, 8:04 PM
I'm also a big fan of dumbing down, so was really happy to see it included here. TBH I also really enjoy versions on the theme: vapidness, cluelessness, gullibility, suggestibility, and just plain dopeyness. Changing how a dude's mind works without impacting their actual intelligence. I love imagining these kinds of changes and fantasizing about how they might change a character and their interaction with the world. @Derek -- I'm sharing this as conversation and not as input on the story. I've been enjoying all of the delicious mental warping and changing happening in the series!
Anonymous
8/16/20, 8:02 PM
@Derek Williams I feel the same just never knew what they were called, so i figured maybe i should look it up, and with trunks you indeed get lots of drag at least with the boardshorts i used to wear ,with those extra pockets and stuff, while swimming so i'm really happy to have changed out of them a few months ago when i started swimming again. and personally i think they are more comfortable too.
Jockmorphr
8/16/20, 7:52 PM
i also really like this addition to the series. The short vignettes are a great way to move the story along while weaving the various characters' experiences together. The suspicious reporter is an excellent addition. Looking forward to reading more!
8/16/20, 7:52 PM
very sweet! i love it.
Anonymous
8/16/20, 7:47 PM
This is so good! Love the transformation. Can't wait to see where you take this in the last chapter.
8/16/20, 7:36 PM
I think the city will have two new people in the porn industry soon
8/16/20, 7:15 PM
@anon - Hah, I was wodnering if you were talking about jammers. That's what I wear when I swim. I don't feel comfortable in a brief cut when I'm swimming, but I hate the drag I get off trunks.
Swizzington
8/16/20, 7:10 PM
To be honest, this story doesn't really dive deeply into Blaine's motivations. But I am definitely considering writing more stories (possibly a prequel) with the character, so that might be explained in future :-)
8/16/20, 7:00 PM
Swizzington, I entirely agree with your comment. Write what you want to see put out there, not to please a fickle audience. I have read a few of your stories, and I enjoy them no matter how they resolve themselves. I am curious as to why our young hypnotist is so cold-blooded, but I suppose that will be explained in future chapters.
Anonymous
8/16/20, 6:56 PM
love those short scenes of how everyone is settling in there new lives can't wait for how the reporter and cameraman turns out. This series is turning into one of mine favorites on this site