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Lusty Stallion
8/15/20, 9:55 PM
wow! Loved Brad's family having counter powers and a good old backfire. Keep em' comin' man. Thanks for sharing your hard work!
Lusty Stallion
8/15/20, 9:40 PM
Loved the totem & loved this. Great work man. Wouldn't it be cool if you could use Ryan's ability on your room mates?
Swizzington
8/15/20, 9:02 PM
To be honest, I am expecting that chapter 2 probably won't appeal to some readers quite so much. It's heavy on the preppy/clothing/hair elements, as we see Blaine transform the appearance of his victims, and less focused on the hypnosis aspect. But yeah, there's more hypnosis inductions - and some sex - in chapter 3, so it might be worth sticking around...? :-)
Anonymous
8/15/20, 8:49 PM
amazing as always. looking forward to the next chapters. im excited that there will be more sex coming. and i love your dark take on things its why i keep coming back to your stories. super hot.
Anonymous
8/15/20, 8:46 PM
The writing, pacing, and induction are just as incredible as they've always been in your writing, I'm really glad to hear you're collaborating with another writer to include sex scenes, as that's whats been really missing from your past stories for me. I hope you continue to integrate more and more evenly paced sex scenes in your work, a somewhat normal sex scene between Austin and Levi before the induction might have made this appeal more of people who are looking for sex in stories. I've been anticipating pt 2 since I finished this but its a little discouraging to hear there will still be no sex in the next chapter, still excited though
8/15/20, 8:37 PM
crap i definitely shouldn't have read this with my roommate home. HOLY SHIT that was fucking HOT. The combination of NLP and Hypnosis is so perfect, and the induction of Austin had me throbbing. That little bead of sweat? the small cry for help? the eye twitch? The POWER that Blaine displays is so juicy! and of course the house will become absolutely spotless, because Blaine will have programmed Austin to do it himself. Now how you're going to have Levi fall into the web is something I'm INTENSELY looking forward to. I can barely wait!
8/15/20, 7:32 PM
Super hot - and already looking to be one of my favourite stories.
Swizzington
8/15/20, 7:31 PM
There will be sex scenes in chapter three (written by another author! My first collaboration!). So I didn't want to slap a "no sex" tag on the story as a whole when there is some to come :-)
8/15/20, 7:31 PM
OH what's going to happen with the Jafar Resistance Force??? I ... Just... Wonder... I'm enjoying the dynamic between Marcus and and Ja(ke)far. I love that the total domination route has been proven as being boring and now the slower route is being explored in more depth. I just can't wait. Thank you for gracing us with this. SO AWESOME.
8/15/20, 7:03 PM
I've been held up for the past few weeks but I promise a new chapter in the next week!