Recent Comments

8/15/20, 10:53 PM
This story, and the Unit 7 one, has Outer Limits/Twilight Zone vibes all over. They are really interesting reads.
Jockmorphr
8/15/20, 10:26 PM
Derek, I am loving this series! It strikes me that Vanilla must have a gym. Probably one of those shiny commercial gyms. It would be fun for the owner, trainers, and/or customers got a real passion for seriously big muscles and muscle worship.
8/15/20, 10:21 PM
This was hot. Though why did you make the sub top, I would have liked the master rimming and fucking his sub. Anyway, nice work.
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
8/15/20, 10:09 PM
I always find a domestic slave more erotic than simply a sexual one. It is how i most enjoy serving as well. A slave should be much more than just a sex toy. He should be a full boy of services, with sex just a part of it.
Anonymous
8/15/20, 10:08 PM
GReAT STORY. nipples cigar and older daddy - WOOF!!!
Lusty Stallion
8/15/20, 9:55 PM
wow! Loved Brad's family having counter powers and a good old backfire. Keep em' comin' man. Thanks for sharing your hard work!
Lusty Stallion
8/15/20, 9:40 PM
Loved the totem & loved this. Great work man. Wouldn't it be cool if you could use Ryan's ability on your room mates?
Swizzington
8/15/20, 9:02 PM
To be honest, I am expecting that chapter 2 probably won't appeal to some readers quite so much. It's heavy on the preppy/clothing/hair elements, as we see Blaine transform the appearance of his victims, and less focused on the hypnosis aspect. But yeah, there's more hypnosis inductions - and some sex - in chapter 3, so it might be worth sticking around...? :-)
Anonymous
8/15/20, 8:49 PM
amazing as always. looking forward to the next chapters. im excited that there will be more sex coming. and i love your dark take on things its why i keep coming back to your stories. super hot.
Anonymous
8/15/20, 8:46 PM
The writing, pacing, and induction are just as incredible as they've always been in your writing, I'm really glad to hear you're collaborating with another writer to include sex scenes, as that's whats been really missing from your past stories for me. I hope you continue to integrate more and more evenly paced sex scenes in your work, a somewhat normal sex scene between Austin and Levi before the induction might have made this appeal more of people who are looking for sex in stories. I've been anticipating pt 2 since I finished this but its a little discouraging to hear there will still be no sex in the next chapter, still excited though