Recent Comments

8/15/20, 3:47 PM
Absolutely fantastic! I loved the descriptions, the plot, the writing! I really like where this is going! So many possibilities from this point on! Great work! Can't wait for the next chapter!
8/15/20, 3:24 PM
Thrilled this series is back! You've struck this perfect balance between the storytelling and the erotica. I sometimes find higher concept stories to be more of a slow burn, but the episodic nature of this guarantees you never have to wait too long for the next bit of debauchery. Great stuff.
Hungo
8/15/20, 3:20 PM
very hot. pls keep going
EntrancedGay92
8/15/20, 3:02 PM
Great start! I like the premise of Austin being unaware Blaine has been conditioning at the gym. It also helps up the arousal factor that one of the characters shares my name ;) Looking forward to the other chapters.
Swizzington
8/15/20, 2:59 PM
And make no mistake, in real life I find that type of thing absolutely abhorrent! But for some reason, when it comes to erotic fiction I just find it so damn sexy... :-)
Anonymous
8/15/20, 2:54 PM
I love the comments. In this world, there ARE scrupulous, immoral/amoral people who care only for their self interest to the point of decimating anyone who gets in their way. This story only highlights this sad reality.
Anonymous
8/15/20, 2:48 PM
spectacular
8/15/20, 2:19 PM
Hyphap, I had some of the same mixed feelings about this story. I wonder if it would work better for me if there was some indication that Austin and Levi were unthinkingly planning to exploit Blaine's labor. For instance, I could imagine a different scenario where Blaine wormed his way into the couple's life by offering to be Austin's unpaid intern, and Levi approved of this because he thought it was economical. I also wish the story gave us a clearer explanation of why Levi isn't putting up more resistance. All that said, the induction scene is very hot, and I loved the creepy descriptions of Austin's subsequent behavior. So I'm still really looking forward to the next part!
8/15/20, 1:45 PM
Fabulous. Loved it - such a neat idea for a series of stories and I can't wait to see how you develop it further, 'bro.
8/15/20, 1:40 PM
I’m so torn about this one. On the one hand, parts of it, like the actual induction, are just unbelievably hot. On the other, I worry that this is going to be another story where basically good people are exploited by someone unscrupulous, without even the chance to resist, and just enough believable details (like the salary negotiation) to make me feel more sad for them than I am turned on. I’ll keep reading—you’re too good of a writer for me not to—but I hope I don’t end up feeling depressed by the end.