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Swizzington
8/15/20, 2:59 PM
And make no mistake, in real life I find that type of thing absolutely abhorrent! But for some reason, when it comes to erotic fiction I just find it so damn sexy... :-)
Anonymous
8/15/20, 2:54 PM
I love the comments. In this world, there ARE scrupulous, immoral/amoral people who care only for their self interest to the point of decimating anyone who gets in their way. This story only highlights this sad reality.
Anonymous
8/15/20, 2:48 PM
spectacular
8/15/20, 2:19 PM
Hyphap, I had some of the same mixed feelings about this story. I wonder if it would work better for me if there was some indication that Austin and Levi were unthinkingly planning to exploit Blaine's labor. For instance, I could imagine a different scenario where Blaine wormed his way into the couple's life by offering to be Austin's unpaid intern, and Levi approved of this because he thought it was economical. I also wish the story gave us a clearer explanation of why Levi isn't putting up more resistance. All that said, the induction scene is very hot, and I loved the creepy descriptions of Austin's subsequent behavior. So I'm still really looking forward to the next part!
8/15/20, 1:45 PM
Fabulous. Loved it - such a neat idea for a series of stories and I can't wait to see how you develop it further, 'bro.
8/15/20, 1:40 PM
I’m so torn about this one. On the one hand, parts of it, like the actual induction, are just unbelievably hot. On the other, I worry that this is going to be another story where basically good people are exploited by someone unscrupulous, without even the chance to resist, and just enough believable details (like the salary negotiation) to make me feel more sad for them than I am turned on. I’ll keep reading—you’re too good of a writer for me not to—but I hope I don’t end up feeling depressed by the end.
8/15/20, 12:47 PM
I loved it, but I wish the main character hadn't given in quite so easily. It also would be cool to get some explanation of why Coach Neismith has suddenly decided to change the team (and his assistant coaches) like this.
Swizzington
8/15/20, 12:44 PM
Thank you everyone for your positive comments! I truly appreciate them all. :-) I am going to be putting the final coat of polish on chapter 2 today!
8/15/20, 12:40 PM
I really like all the little details we get as mythology nerd, but I'm especially interested by one. In the plane, a blond giant call his twink "wolf cub", I though it was Ragnulf, but as we later see three jocks and a twink, with the couple from the plane elsewhere. Does that mean we will get a Fenrir chapter? It'll we be interesting to see how two different wolf treat their pup/cub, maybe even see the two interact.
Anonymous
8/15/20, 12:19 PM
Such a hot start! I love how you took the time to give us the slow build of the full induction, and I’m so intrigued to find out what’s already been done to Levi. He’s clearly already had work done to him, yet there’s still some resistance which I’m sure will be broken in some delicious manner before the tale is told. Roll on chapter two :D