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Lusty Stallion
8/15/20, 8:00 AM
You da man! Nailed it! So hot. Can't wait for tomorrows
8/15/20, 7:49 AM
Awesome work! Fantastic writing, as usual, and a super hot plot to boot. Can't wait to find out what happens next!
Lusty Stallion
8/15/20, 7:19 AM
It feels less and less like the AI's aiding. You're a great writer man.
Lusty Stallion
8/15/20, 6:59 AM
So hot man. it's getting better and better.
Lusty Stallion
8/15/20, 6:43 AM
Great marriage of Derek's style with the AI. Thanks man
Lusty Stallion
8/15/20, 6:29 AM
Thanks Derek. I've been enjoying AI Dungeon and imagined the edits you probably did to draw the story to your own place. It's great having such a powerful tool for new ideas. Looking forward to reading the next story
8/15/20, 6:23 AM
I keep coming back to this story. I love the poly relationship aspect. The story is creative and sexy. I love the furry manliness, yet the love is tender. Amazing work.
8/15/20, 6:21 AM
aaaand Gary is a sub bottom, predictable....
boi98229
8/15/20, 6:14 AM
Wow, that felt really authentic and powerful. i love this story. i am super hopeful that you continue it, Sir. It was really interesting how Blaine controlled the evening's discussions and the test of hypnosis as a real 'thing'. Now that Blaine has control over Austin, will be starting work in their home, and has rubbed Levi's nose in his smug denial with pretty substantial and unnerving proof, it would be very interesting to see where you take the story from here and how you develop their relationships. Levi will definitely be on the alert for anything strange. With complete control over both Austin and Levi, it would appear that Blaine would have access to substantial wealth and a pretty laid back life. That seems like a lot of motivation for someone with Levi's skills and bold personality. So, who is actually "The Master of the House"? Does the title refer to the current circumstances or something still to come? The story as it stands potentially opens a world of possibilities for future chapters for a skilled author like you, Sir! In any case, thank you so much, Sir, for sharing your wonderful imagination and writing skills. Until another chapter appears for this story, i will definitely be reading your other works!
8/15/20, 6:00 AM
@anon - Got it. The swimmer is in the pool.