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8/15/20, 6:21 AM
aaaand Gary is a sub bottom, predictable....
boi98229
8/15/20, 6:14 AM
Wow, that felt really authentic and powerful. i love this story. i am super hopeful that you continue it, Sir. It was really interesting how Blaine controlled the evening's discussions and the test of hypnosis as a real 'thing'. Now that Blaine has control over Austin, will be starting work in their home, and has rubbed Levi's nose in his smug denial with pretty substantial and unnerving proof, it would be very interesting to see where you take the story from here and how you develop their relationships. Levi will definitely be on the alert for anything strange. With complete control over both Austin and Levi, it would appear that Blaine would have access to substantial wealth and a pretty laid back life. That seems like a lot of motivation for someone with Levi's skills and bold personality. So, who is actually "The Master of the House"? Does the title refer to the current circumstances or something still to come? The story as it stands potentially opens a world of possibilities for future chapters for a skilled author like you, Sir! In any case, thank you so much, Sir, for sharing your wonderful imagination and writing skills. Until another chapter appears for this story, i will definitely be reading your other works!
8/15/20, 6:00 AM
@anon - Got it. The swimmer is in the pool.
Anonymous
8/15/20, 5:55 AM
@Derek Williams TBH it was more about the swimmer. Swimmers usually have some great assets especially in those tight spandex trunks (love those more than normal speedo's) that shows everything and thus i though it would be a shame if some part wasn't used. usually i'm more into leather or rubber like the leather fireman but lately i been swimming a lot so..... The need for getting fucked while topping was more about the some condition being satisfied so that it is some kind of reward that once satisfied the pleasure will increase exponentially. so it doesn't have to be threesomes but some other condition can be used too And with the spandex/swimming trunks fetish every training session will be more interesting short of like team building. hope this explains it a bit more
8/15/20, 5:15 AM
@New Guy In Town - Thanks for reading and sharing your opinion. I’ve been thinking about this comment for a couple hours and I think I’ve nailed down what’s bugging me about it. Once you cross the line on non-consensual alteration to a person, it’s all problematic. If it helps, know that this is all a dark fantasy. None of these transformations actually occur and there’s no mysterious stranger running around radically altering people’s bodies and personalities without their consent. If that wasn’t the case, yeah, turning the guy gay *would* be problematic, irrespective of the dumbing down, and regardless of if he needed to be or not. Luckily it’s fiction.
Anonymous
8/15/20, 4:45 AM
to prove it to Levi, I hope Blaine has Austin cut that man bun off
Anonymous
8/15/20, 4:43 AM
I don't know how I feel about this... well I guess I shall wait and see what the rest of the story entails!
Willie Cici
8/15/20, 3:24 AM
Loved it!! Unfortunately, for me, I was writing something in this vein. Oh well!!
Anonymous
8/15/20, 3:10 AM
Great story! Loved how clueless the main character was before and after.
8/15/20, 1:27 AM
I've been following along with this story, but I feel sorry for the librarian in this leg of the story. It just feels that he didn't need to be dumbed down, especially as he was merely doing his job. Bringing out his gay side wouldn't have been problematic, but the dumbing down is a bridge too far in my book.