Recent Comments

8/14/20, 10:50 PM
That was simply amazing! Loved it so much and didn't want it to end, hoping part 2 is in the works!
Swizzington
8/14/20, 10:32 PM
Just FYI: This will be three chapters total! I will post the rest over the weekend or early next week.
Jake
8/14/20, 10:22 PM
awesome story can't wait to see more hopefully there's another part
8/14/20, 10:10 PM
Easily one of my favorites you've written. Well done :)
8/14/20, 10:01 PM
It's hot. Especially when Collin makes the jock slave to the nerd and the jock is aware of it. For a moment I thought the nerd would be the slave because of Collin's feeling nauseated by him and wanting to slap him. It's really hot to have a role reversal.
8/14/20, 9:59 PM
Just read this again -- still a super hot scene
Anonymous
8/14/20, 9:58 PM
oh man im loving this
8/14/20, 9:33 PM
Nice story! I think the use of 1st person narration works really well here.
8/14/20, 9:24 PM
@anon - Tell me more about the vers one. What turns you on there? It's not a thing for me, so I can't write it without learning a few details. @boyn2changes - Haha, yah man, dumbing down is the shit. Glad you liked this one! You can probably tell, getting dumb is a pretty big fetish for me too.
8/14/20, 9:08 PM
I love, Love, LOVE dumbing down stories. Its the first tag that gets my attention when I see a new story. And my favorite dumbing down offshoot of all, is playing with a characters ability to read or write. OMG this was fucking hot, a page taken directly out of my internal fantasies. I love how you didn't just gloss over this detail, but expanded on it greatly. Derek you've always been a master at capturing 'dumbing down' in previous stories, and you don't disappoint in this one! Thanks!!! :)