Recent Comments

8/14/20, 5:28 AM
I KNEW the wait for this would be worth it. You really mindfucked the chief there,it was beautiful. I like your creative approaches in this series. The pastor is quite the surprise,now I'm excited to see what comes next
Jake
8/14/20, 3:54 AM
it would be hot if Ryan's powers backfired on him great story
8/14/20, 3:23 AM
Love this series but is it may be hard for new readers to notice it is a series since the last two entries are standalone stories. I love how u write the corruption of every character and how we get to see them rationalizing their new reality as it builds, it’s quite hot! I bit sad Officer Humpme didn’t got a lot of active participation in this one, hope we see more him next time
8/14/20, 3:06 AM
Definitely was a fan of this! Very hot! I only have two words of advice: iron out those typos and pick whether each change is described or not. It's just odd for him to say a pair of straight boys are in showing thongs and mesh crop tops but then have Brad get his shrinking waistline described. Either method works but just pick one and stick to it, is all.
Anonymous
8/14/20, 2:28 AM
i enjoyed this chapter as the others but the inclusion of religion ruined it slightly for me. still looking foward to more of your work though.
8/14/20, 2:13 AM
Controlling someone with your mind is one thing, controlling their whole beings with a narration is another. I fucking love this story
Aug 10, 2020
BearBoi
8/14/20, 1:40 AM
nice to see some recipricol tf here, with some men becoming small subby fags and some being big manly doms.
8/13/20, 11:53 PM
I echo the first comment. It would have been nice to know something about host orange and host green. That said, let's move on. What a great mental ride. It was fast paced and exciting, perfect for the tempo of the take over. A very fun read. And if I ever had to imagine orange tentacles coming from something, I would have guessed vag. Yet there it was getting me entranced and excited.
8/13/20, 11:05 PM
I'm definitely getting a mental image of a rubber police officer uniform to show off his hot bod, haha.
8/13/20, 10:44 PM
holy crap, great story. im glad you continued this.