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Anonymous
8/14/20, 8:40 PM
Love this story thanks for writing it. Would love the see a swimmer with a fetish for spandex, or a versatile who can only top when he is being fucked
8/14/20, 8:34 PM
@Heru Kane - I'm glad you asked that today. I'm editing tomorrows chapter and it just wasn't coming together. Let's see what I can do.
8/14/20, 8:27 PM
So this is an interesting saga. Now, I am not entirely a fan of all the dumbing down, and so I was wondering if someone can be made into a gay top stable master focused on rimming and made more intelligent with a fetish for pet play. Maybe he was somewhat dumb before but nice to our mysterious controller. Anyway, the point of this was that its a very interesting saga. I also like how its the controller who we mostly follow. But yeah, interesting series.
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8/14/20, 7:38 PM
i can't get enough of your hot smoky stories! Thank you stud!
8/14/20, 6:25 PM
Thanks guys! @MasterJerker - I definitely thought about going there right away, but I figure Smokey can find one for himself ;)
8/14/20, 6:22 PM
Hot Story! Keep it going!
8/14/20, 6:07 PM
Being a long time reader, though admittedly a first time commenter, I think this chapter was an absolute breath of fresh air. The nature of this site and stories it contains lends itself to hyper focusing only on the sexual aspects, but I find that its personally best when the psychology of the characters is explored in greater depth. Needless to say that sort of story telling when confined to the parameters of this particularly niche genre is a bit hard to do, but when you take a more realistic -if admittedly still exaggerated- approach to the control, you have much more room to navigate that landscape. You've managed an absolutely phenomenal bit of character writing here, and if it weren't for the core subject matter at hand I'd seriously recommend looking into publishing it separately. Aside from a good deal of erotic pleasure you've given me a satisfying read and a look into the minds of some fascinating characters. Which is all an overly long way of saying thank you for the story and I look forward to more.
8/14/20, 5:47 PM
Sorry but this made no sense.
8/14/20, 5:33 PM
Very hot! Such a fan of your work.