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8/14/20, 10:22 AM
Absolutely love how he became a submissive feminine guy!
8/14/20, 8:56 AM
So fucking hot! Nipples are the deal!
Aug 14, 2020
8/14/20, 8:47 AM
Really enjoyed this one. Would have been good if the transformations had had a bit more detail to them but a great first story. Hope we get to see more of Larry’s book.
8/14/20, 8:13 AM
Word program I'm using says I have no typos except the character names... The two ass holes in the class were just quick minor changes that I didn't see a point in describing. Obviously their shirts would have changed into what Ryan described. I just thought it best left up to the readers imagination what kind of shirts they were wearing at the time. Their were a few other details that Ryan changed without even realizing it which some of them are brought up in the next chapter.
8/14/20, 7:49 AM
love this story soooo much! would love to role play it out... shinyspideyweb@gmail.com
8/14/20, 7:46 AM
i love this story. keep coming back to it. again and again. please write some more! thank you
8/14/20, 5:28 AM
I KNEW the wait for this would be worth it. You really mindfucked the chief there,it was beautiful. I like your creative approaches in this series. The pastor is quite the surprise,now I'm excited to see what comes next
Jake
8/14/20, 3:54 AM
it would be hot if Ryan's powers backfired on him great story
8/14/20, 3:23 AM
Love this series but is it may be hard for new readers to notice it is a series since the last two entries are standalone stories. I love how u write the corruption of every character and how we get to see them rationalizing their new reality as it builds, it’s quite hot! I bit sad Officer Humpme didn’t got a lot of active participation in this one, hope we see more him next time
8/14/20, 3:06 AM
Definitely was a fan of this! Very hot! I only have two words of advice: iron out those typos and pick whether each change is described or not. It's just odd for him to say a pair of straight boys are in showing thongs and mesh crop tops but then have Brad get his shrinking waistline described. Either method works but just pick one and stick to it, is all.