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1/5/25, 7:36 AM
Hey just wanted to say still thinking about this story and excited to see what you have in store for our protagonist. Hope you have time in the new year to continue!
Anonymous
1/5/25, 7:32 AM
Very, very promising. Excellent work and superb voice to all of your characters. Looking forward to more. I was taken aback by the light twist at the end about the university, please build out this universe more!
12/24/20, 5:31 AM
Thanks for your comment, amul. I do tend to use the "enslaved men become pornstars" ending a lot in my stories for a couple of reasons. First, it's a way to answer the narrative question, "Why is this happening?" I also don't want to tell the story from the perspective of the mind controller--a lot of stories will depict a gay geek who's building a harem in order to get revenge on a homophobic society, which to me is even more of a "thought-terminating cliche." So for me, one of the logical reasons for mass enslavement is because the slavers feel like they could make a profit from the labor of the enslaved. And to be a mainstream gay porn-star, you have to put in the daily labor of "working out." So changing the name of the gym from "Star Fitness" (the actual name of a gym where I used to work out) to "Porn Star Fitness" seemed like a fitting choice. And I actually did think about the economics behind this, so here the mind control device is the (relatively cheap, if only it worked this way in real life) use of audio subliminals over the gym's sound-system.

1/5/25, 7:01 AM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) Normally i tend to agree with amul regarding apparently permanent life-changing non-consensual total mind control. In this case though, except for that very brief moment of doubt before they are encouraged to step into the shower, everyone seems very happy to go along with the whole plan. Presumably Master Seb houses and feeds everyone as an expense to his successful new porn movie business. Master Seb seems like such a sharp very appealing young man who knows how to build a happy hard-working community. Besides all these feel-so-good changes Seb has made are absolutely enthralling and wonderful. He's even found useful work for his aging uncle. It feels so natural that we should respect, admire, and yes... even worship Master Seb. Of course i also admire, respect, and worship all the authors on this site, like Hypnothrill, who can write such enthralling and wonderful stories!! Let's not forget too that this is just a fictional story. So, my thanks also to Hypnothrill.
Anonymous
1/5/25, 6:56 AM
please update i really love this story
1/5/25, 5:18 AM
And so we've reached what I believe is the end. Loved the whole story. Felt a little like a throwback to some of your earlier works. I wonder if Langley will ever learn of what Harris has gotten away with or if he'll be able to start his own little herd of followers.
1/5/25, 2:09 AM
What a nice ending. Glad that both sides got their happy ending. And that open ending of either Benji getting the memories or not is a nice touch.
1/4/25, 9:10 PM
Amazing, read! I loved it

1/4/25, 9:46 PM
@[LKV11](/user/show/10013658) Thank you!
Anonymous
1/4/25, 9:12 PM
Great story, love coming back to it. Hopefully one day you come back.
1/4/25, 9:09 PM
Are you going to write again?
1/4/25, 7:54 PM
Well this just warms the cockles of my heart! Charlie, you should be incredibly proud of the wonderful story you've created and shared with us! So full of character, life, and - yes - juicy jock cake! :drooling_face: Can't wait to see what Luke, Sammy, Mark, and the gang will be up to! I know I'll be eagerly waiting!