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1/5/25, 2:07 PM
GO JASON! YAY for the good guys!
1/3/25, 11:16 PM
Interesting premise.

1/4/25, 2:12 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Came to me when I had insomnia one night 😅

1/4/25, 7:14 PM
@[The Dirty Spiders](/user/show/571676) I can understand that. Many guys could use a burly Sandman to put them to sleep.

1/5/25, 1:23 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Yeah, talk about fantasy fiction 😅
1/5/25, 1:13 PM
Excellent. But am I wrong to want another person (perhaps the cute guy at sex shop who sells the cheetah briefs to John?) to somehow find out about the situation between father and son, and take advantage of their mutual hypno fetish? To turn both Mark and John into unwilling--yet secretly willing-- slaves? Secretly until it's too late to resist, that is. Part-time mind-controlled zombies, triggered by their ultimate master. But the rest of the time, a loving duo leading their regular lives... I know it's rude to look a gift horse in the mouth, but it's the aspect of having control taken by others that adds the zing to the father/son relationship--the danger. But whatever you do with this story, don't stop. So very, very grateful for the ever-increasing length. Here, size does matter.
1/5/25, 12:59 PM
Very grateful for this new chapter. Awesome.
1/5/25, 12:30 PM
There's so much going on in this story, I'm impressed at how much you've packed into it. It's another one of those where I'm more invested in the characters/plot than waiting for the tfs, which is the highest praise I can give really. This chapter reminded me of the quotation "Happy families are all alike; every unhappy family is unhappy in its own way." Like... wow, poor boys. Particularly fuck Victor's parents tbh, honestly it makes me just root for him/all of them to be happy no matter how they turn up. There were some sweet spots at least, I like Ray becoming more comfortable being gay without having realised that's what was happening really. And some interesting 'lore' stuff this chapter as well, in summary no one has any idea what the hell they're doing which is... promising?
1/1/25, 5:51 AM
Fucking amazing!!! What a great episode. Rick's well on his way to having his own personal boy toy. Great work!!!

1/5/25, 8:41 AM
@[Lusty Stallion](/user/show/10012213) Thank you for the encouragement! :-)
1/3/25, 2:58 AM
Love the progression and pace.

1/5/25, 8:40 AM
@Flamefox23 I hope not to disappoint with the next chapters :-)
1/5/25, 7:42 AM
Loving this

1/5/25, 8:39 AM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Thank you :-)
1/5/25, 7:36 AM
Hey just wanted to say still thinking about this story and excited to see what you have in store for our protagonist. Hope you have time in the new year to continue!
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1/5/25, 7:32 AM
Very, very promising. Excellent work and superb voice to all of your characters. Looking forward to more. I was taken aback by the light twist at the end about the university, please build out this universe more!