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8/10/20, 9:26 PM
suggestion: what about the police and the fire department?
Anonymous
8/10/20, 9:00 PM
totally hot bro!!!
Aug 10, 2020
Anonymous
8/10/20, 7:21 PM
The dynamic of the curators being dumbed down into aggressive fuck monsters is really hot lol keep at it with the quality material
Aug 10, 2020
Anonymous
8/10/20, 6:57 PM
great work
Aug 10, 2020
8/10/20, 5:09 PM
Fantastic--the physical and mental nature of the changes (love the cat-like ADHD), the humiliation angle from their loss of skills and the audience's newfound desire to degrade them, everything. Your stories are always a treat, but this one really hit the spot.
Anonymous
8/10/20, 2:40 PM
terrific
Anonymous
8/10/20, 2:15 PM
Man your stories are so hot. You are by far my fav author on here :) Love the magical element to them. keep writing man, you have talent!
8/10/20, 7:59 AM
Another great chapter. I must admit that I found the whole "not playing football cause it is gay" rather weird. Especially when the guy is wannabe actor. I would have thought that the prejudice against those two passions would have been opposite. Who thinks football is gay?
8/10/20, 7:09 AM
This one worked a lot better and the flow was there that built up the dramatic tension. Looking forward to the next part!
8/10/20, 6:34 AM
A great story that definitely gave me "Star Kid" vibes in the beginning, but the grammar and spelling errors were too persistent to ignore. Your idea and descriptions are all great, but this needs some heavy cleaning up.